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‎ After one hour, the train slowed down because of heavy rain. Tracks wet, visibility low, so speed kam ho gayi.



‎Raindrops pattering hard on roof and windows. Coach mein thandi hawa aa rahi thi door se.

‎Ranjith stood at the open door of the coach. Hands on side bars. Looking out at rain-soaked fields. Wind blowing his shirt.

‎Lalla came back slowly, samosa bucket in hand. Beedi in mouth.

‎Wet lungi sticking to legs. He saw Ranjith. Smiled small, respectful.

‎Stood there near door, not too close.

‎Ranjith looked at him. Asked calm, “Are you alone?”

‎Lalla nodded. Took beedi out. Spat paan juice outside.

‎“Haan saab. Meri biwi buddhi ho gayi. Beti-damaad, unke bacche sab gaon mein hain. Main akela hi ghoomta hoon train mein.”

‎His eyes again went to Divya.

‎She was sitting twenty feet away, near window. Yellow saree glowing in dim coach light.
‎ Tight blouse wet little from rain spray. Pallu slightly slipped.
‎Breasts rising-falling as she talked to Monu.

‎Lalla stared openly. Eyes hungry.

‎Ranjith noticed. Asked direct, low voice.

‎“Why are you looking at her?”

‎Lalla became shy. Looked down. Beedi trembling in fingers.

‎“Kitni khoobsurat hai woh ladki, saab. Dekh ke dil khush ho jata hai.”

‎Ranjith smiled small. No anger in face.

‎“Uska pati nahi hai train mein. Lekin beta hai.”

‎Lalla smiled wider. Dirty smile.

‎“Uske pati nahi hai toh… acha hai. Usko dekh ke mera lauda bada ho gaya.”

‎He adjusted lungi front. Bulge visible now.

‎Ranjith looked at it. Then at Lalla face. Smiled again.

‎“Sirf dekhoge ya kuch karoge?”

‎Lalla kuch nahi bola. Just smiled shy. Beedi jalaya phir se.
‎Smoke blew out in rain.

‎Divya observed their talking from far. Saw husband and old man talking.
‎ Saw Lalla adjusting himself.
‎ Saw Ranjith smile.

‎ he went to his seat.
‎ lalla gone back.

‎ after two minutes lalla again  stand there.

‎ She looked at Monu. Said soft, “Mummy ko darwaze pe khada hona hai.”

‎Ranjith understood. Lalla is there.
‎ he said nothing.

‎Divya stood up. Walked to door slowly. Just to tease her husband.


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