Ek Anokhee Love Story

[val.coutinho]

Val Very good story so far 

Maybe you should proof read your stories a few times before posting so you can check for spelling and grammar errors...like extra long sentences separated by commas...sometimes confuse you as to whether you are meaning to end that line or was it leading to something more...small small spelling mistakes likes who instead of woh...etc...

Overall a good start so far...restrict your updates to maybe one or two a week so you get time to draft the next few parts where you begin to weave the story and characters together...This will also give you a chance and time to think thru and add references to future happenings and past references and how to seamlessly bring it all together...Just my opinion...

Thank you Preeti, all noted....
In the private message i have explained...