Ek Anokhee Love Story

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Your writing is excellent and amazing. This story can be extremely hot and erotic and also a blockbuster one if the heroine is a conservative,majabi, pakiza and strictly faithful wife who is being seduced slowly and steadily by a man of opposite majab who is a number one badmash,randibaj,magibaj and a sexual pervert.

Thank you Shan for the wonderful idea... 
Maybe in the future if I continue to write more stories I will surely use this concept, but this story is set in my mind, as i told in the begining its a true story with facts and fiction.... I dont want to mend the story with some thing else, Its a start for me as a writer and let me see how much potrntial i have to put into this story and how the outcomes is at the end, I have to yet work a lot on this story as the story has not reached 20% of what has happened in real life.