Adultery Love Sex And War : Age Of Darkness

[Demeter]

This was another lengthy chapter. I know a lot of readers want me to do this weekly but honestly when I try to do it , it lowers the quality and I feel the narrative gets rushed. I don't want to compromise on the quality so sometimes unexpected delays. I planned to post this in the morning but then I noticed some grammatic errors and problems so I had to rectify it which resulted in that unexpected delay. I will again try to do this weekly but like I said no guarantees.


Now back to the story , I did state in the previous post that I did tone down some stuff which I will reveal now as I don't plan to include in this story. Initially there was a lot of sex involved in the story which I toned some of it down. First one I removed is the moment Sonarika and Hemant talks , during their conversation. They end up recollecting events of July 2 , 2012. This recollection ends up making them horny and this results in Sonarika masturbating to Hemant's memory while Hemant goes to a party late and hooks up with another celebrity. It turned this idea down because this would force me to show Sonarika's perspective and I don't want to do it just yet , simply saving her part of the narration in the story for a later chapter. Also I didn't want to turn Hemant into a full on Gigolo LOL 


The other was also another Celebrity fling which had Hemant hooking up with Ananya Pandey and Shanaya Kapoor which results in Hemant's first threesome in the story after a long time. But I didn't wanna overdo the "Celebrity" fling thing so I instead toned it down and reduced it into a small hookup between him and Ananya in her vanity which complimented the story as it grew potential to the equation between Pranitha and Hemant.


Now this one I scrapped it way early in this chapter where the original idea was for the chapter to end with Meghna and Hemant having a night of sex where after he saves her from Yadav , she comes to Hemant's place at night and in secret Tara films it for a future plan to dismantle Hemant. But I scrapped it the moment I started writing and instead focused on their equations interlapping and giving a tease of reveal to each other. Now Meghna is doubtful about Hemant and she is now aware Hemant has a dark past. Will she stay away from Hemant or try to target him anyways? Only time will tell.


This was also a plan I completely abandoned , which was the chapter to end with a sex scene between Pranitha and Hemant as she returns to Mumbai by the end and they consumnate their relationship. But now I have a far more erotic idea for them to go through so we will see about that in the future chapter.

These were the changes I made and have no interest of including it in the story in the future!

Obviously the best part I liked was Sonarika and Hemant's history actually interlapping with each other with the reveal of Sonarika's father and Hemant's mentor being good friends. This opens the doorway for Sonarika to see the reveal of Michael King. At the same time it also helps in flipping the narrative as now Hemant is in the betrayer seat. It all now lays in the hands of Sonarika on how she react. Will she feel betrayed and heartbroken realizing her husband was not the same man he was? That he had darker secrets of his own? Would she feel her marriage was a lie? Will she assume Hemant as a bad influence and take Karan away from him? only time will tell.


The coming chapters will have more action of both kinds , and this chapter already set up the next big action setpiece to take place in Lebonon so exciting days are ahead. I hope you all have a good read and really feel satisfied by this chapter because I really loved writing the sex LOL.

Dangerous situations are coming and the story is about to take some dramatic showdowns and confrontations in the future , Wait and Read as the sage of Love Sex and War continues as the war of Michael King Vs AZRAEL and Sonarika Vs Meghna gets more personal and dangerous!


      From Your's Truly

 HARRY JORDAN 

A ‘gigolo’ Hemant would destroy his top character.
He is not the ‘gigolo’ type!
That's why the decision to ‘no sex with Meghna’ was very wise and correct.

The approach you chose between Hemant and Pranitha also reflects the relationship between the two, because what develops there is not based on sex, but on a mutual, sophisticated attraction and understanding 
for each other.

Lebanon, or more precisely the city of Beirut, has been the scene of conflict between different ethnic groups and religious denominations for over 50 years, followed by attacks and murder.
When Hemant cleans up there, he won't attract much attention, as such actions are commonplace in Beirut.
This is therefore another aspect that speaks in favour of the choice of location.

I am convinced that your suggestion for brightening up the history of Sonarika and Hemant, if realised, will be the highlight of the coming chapter.

I am already looking forward to it ...


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Demeter