01-02-2026, 08:17 PM
@Heyjiwriter
You have brilliant way of story telling. This is my first comment . i always used to read and close but your story made me to comment by signing in. What a twist.. I thought Mirna going to cheat Vikram. but u made Vikram cheat Mirna using revenge..
that gentle sex Vikram - Mirna to Bharath - Priya aggressive sex back to back un intendted compariosn is awesome.
Story is very unpredictable. Dont know how u will make Mirna cheat Vikram and sleep with Bharath. one suggestion don't make it forcible.
I loved ur other story Prem - Nivi as well. Looking forward to more from u.
You have brilliant way of story telling. This is my first comment . i always used to read and close but your story made me to comment by signing in. What a twist.. I thought Mirna going to cheat Vikram. but u made Vikram cheat Mirna using revenge..
that gentle sex Vikram - Mirna to Bharath - Priya aggressive sex back to back un intendted compariosn is awesome.
Story is very unpredictable. Dont know how u will make Mirna cheat Vikram and sleep with Bharath. one suggestion don't make it forcible.
I loved ur other story Prem - Nivi as well. Looking forward to more from u.
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