Adultery Sneha's plight in Azamgarh

[Herbiee]

What an update bro, it was extraordinary. This update took this story to its peak. You presented the scenes in a more sexual way in different angle without much explanation. You are not leading this story like a normal sex story. It feels like a web series mode. You took all the readers into the room with Dhruv as witness. Your writing style shows Sneha as a real person. We can feel each character infront us as real. Bro you are one of the best writers in this format. You have a special creative talent. Please continue like this.

Suggestion; Keep Dhruv as a witness. Scenes from Dhruv's point of view are good for this story. But don't create a sexual relationship between mother and son. Sneha can't be that kind of person. It will ruin the quality of this story.

Request: Don't abandon this story halfway like Meera's story.
And This is an English category story. So please update the story in English. The characters hindi communications in the story makes the scenes more realistic. Thats good for the story. But if you add Hindi, please add English explanation along with it.