Adultery The Husband’s Doubt [Completed]

[Whyamihere]

Well , This is your story . Yes , You cannot satisfy every one . .


But After that informer introduce , The story tank . The sex was as Usual great no doubt , even better . The chemistry between Aadil and NIVI was best , The plot turning to each other was great but there was no pay off .

I mean the seriousness and tension was gone . Final arc which in I expected that husbands gonna find out the truth and it is their turn because Both Husbands started to dig , So the seriousness and tension was there ,leading towards Climax but once it was cleared that nope , the story just took another turn ,it kind of became stale , no high or low points . Like Flatline , four of them just playing each other . The characters also felt like cardboard . 

That is why the ending is so pathetic , and Then you went one step forward and ruined it further . 

Why did you even introduce VIKRAM ? One phone call from ROHAN and that character just vanished ?

The setup towards the end was great but it is the pay off which ruined the whole story and left bitter taste in mouth . 

At least it ended . PREM and NITIN two brain dead zombie husbands . Just even reading their part hurts my brain . So much stupidity .  It would have been better if they were out of equation whole time and wives should have handled the whole thing , and husbands just working in office . 

Again , I am not saying the ending is pathetic , It was good but only if you had not set up the plot . 

I mean the flow of story disturbed , it scattered everywhere ultimately leads to catastrophic ending . No satisfaction , No closure , I mean nothing No body loose Anything which is good in a way . Every one just get adjusted as equal . 

But after reading your comment , I thought why did you choose to end the story this way and I kind of know why . It was great move   (Just a hunch )

Well , Now it ends .




But again The story was great , Great Writing , Fast Updates , Eroticism was highlight of the story. Some of the best eroticism i have read specially Aadil and NIVI . 


Again Kudos to you .   

( Comments are for fun , Not Criticism of the story or writer )

Absolutely agree.... the bitter taste of No ending feels bad... I mean to be honest, here cheating wives and Rohan/adhil won... the truthful men prem and nitin got played and didnt get any proper closure.  For example,  after prem learnt the past from Vikram and madhavan,  he should have had Absolute doubt that his wife was fked too( know his doubtful nature) because the change in his wife's behavior,  no physical or emotion intimacy equals to a 3rd persons presence in a wokens life. 

Still, loved the story.. everyone has own perception and fantasies.. so no blame game at all. Just looking forward for more awesome stories ?