Adultery The Husband’s Doubt [Completed]

[Whyamihere]

So true. I Agree with every single line of yours. This is the reason i ended the story with open ending.  The real time consequences are bigger. I even stay with Prem or Nitin on this they are honest but their wives are fucking around. Imagine same in real time.. The mens genrally dnt hide or keep secrets. Nivi or Vani would have got divorce. because the story has this one solid show prem/nitin are never a cuck or wanna be.. They are just worried about the friends and wish their family get back on feet as family.. The proper end would be atleast the least let them have their familes and ladies back to family zone..  I also saw the line fantasy cannot be accpeted as okay. Never.. its just a fantasy withing the fiction within xossipy. :) and inside one personal thoughts.

I am really looking forward for more stories written by you. You are good in writing and very creative too.. I just hope, just hope that in one of your future stories, you ensure that justice and rightful person prevails. It doesnt has to be a happy ending, but a ending which feels right if considered to be a real life experience. 


If you ever need help to come up with a plot or have a weiters block, ask us and we will help you with different idea, which you can use it in your own amazing imaginative way. Afterall,  you are good story teller ? 

Meanwhile, jst to know - are you writing anything ? Can we hope for a new story from you anytime soon ?