30-01-2026, 07:17 AM
(This post was last modified: 31-01-2026, 12:37 AM by Whyamihere. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
@heygiwriter
Like everyone said - We loved your story telling narration, plots, twists, climax and cliffhanger just AWESOME.
But what is also more surprising is that you checking and replying cautiously to everyone... Dude you are just on another level of awesomeness ?
however, like you wisely said that its not easy to meet everyone's expectations and point of views etc etc...
I also have a advice or request or suggestion. I hope you atleast read my pov and understand what and where am coming from. So lemme begin to explain what I really want to say and hence why I made this account and write my 1st ever comment in my last 20+ yrs of being a active reader on such site
" Cheating, Adultery, Kink, Fetish.... everyone has it and enjoys it in their own way. But as a human and from personal experience being cheated + humiliated + shamed and not being able to do anything against is a very very very bad feeling for a human (from a normal man's perspective) (cucks and simps are different breeds all together) . Any story that shows and portrays that a WOMEN feels empowered being a slut is a stab to human society and to MEN if am being honest. Mens are slut maker, while womens are sluts. Its not easy to make a women slut than a women making themselves slut. If you may have read an amazing story " The Unwanted Houseguest" that story touches every aspect of kinks, shames, simps, ducks, bdsm, subs and doms etc... but in the end rightfullness prevails. Right thing has to prevail... IT MUST PREVAIL....
Am not saying theres always a happy ending... but some conscious rightfull relief of atleast one thing happening right.
For example in my opinion " Prem and nitin should have found out the cheating... the appropriate skut shaming of their wives, the humiliation of their wives defending illogical sense of freedom and control but being nothing more than worse of sluts. The husband's disowning them and divorcing them and give them ultimate freedom on expense of not getting custody of the children or else the husband's will prove thier infidelity in court. The wives have everything now they wanted - freedom, have sex with anyone anywhere, their business and money ..... but no TRUE LOVE and Real Caring / trust from that one person... have one void known as LOVE... the false empowerment of success and smile behind the guilt of destroying family is something every h03 should feel the shame.
Those 2 men's building career and giving better guidance to their children's. Etc seems a rightful ending. Because here no one actually won or lost.... everyone won and everyone lost...
My whole point is let morals and righful consciousness win rather than any gender. The reason I say so is that even if this is just a fiction, it does add up in one's thought and might give birth to something that shouldn't exist in their mind. As a moral code, give flare to the fantasies, but dont give birth to such fantasies as something to be accepted as OKAY.... because u never know when your words may ruin a person's life in real...
There are many cucks stories where the man stays cuck till the end of story because he has to accept the consequences of being cuck... however characters like PREM or any such character in any story is a REAL MAN. He made mistakes, realized his mistakes and made effort to work it out. That's what being a man is and dont shame such man with a ending where such slut cheating women thinks infidelity is success and empowering.
There are people who want to see their partner with someone else once tbh... but they know that the fantasy as 1 thing and the consequences of it is other thing. its jst a fantasy or a thought, but not every cuck would let any other man have dominance over their own manly ego/ authority.. simple.....
Like everyone said - We loved your story telling narration, plots, twists, climax and cliffhanger just AWESOME.
But what is also more surprising is that you checking and replying cautiously to everyone... Dude you are just on another level of awesomeness ?
however, like you wisely said that its not easy to meet everyone's expectations and point of views etc etc...
I also have a advice or request or suggestion. I hope you atleast read my pov and understand what and where am coming from. So lemme begin to explain what I really want to say and hence why I made this account and write my 1st ever comment in my last 20+ yrs of being a active reader on such site
" Cheating, Adultery, Kink, Fetish.... everyone has it and enjoys it in their own way. But as a human and from personal experience being cheated + humiliated + shamed and not being able to do anything against is a very very very bad feeling for a human (from a normal man's perspective) (cucks and simps are different breeds all together) . Any story that shows and portrays that a WOMEN feels empowered being a slut is a stab to human society and to MEN if am being honest. Mens are slut maker, while womens are sluts. Its not easy to make a women slut than a women making themselves slut. If you may have read an amazing story " The Unwanted Houseguest" that story touches every aspect of kinks, shames, simps, ducks, bdsm, subs and doms etc... but in the end rightfullness prevails. Right thing has to prevail... IT MUST PREVAIL....
Am not saying theres always a happy ending... but some conscious rightfull relief of atleast one thing happening right.
For example in my opinion " Prem and nitin should have found out the cheating... the appropriate skut shaming of their wives, the humiliation of their wives defending illogical sense of freedom and control but being nothing more than worse of sluts. The husband's disowning them and divorcing them and give them ultimate freedom on expense of not getting custody of the children or else the husband's will prove thier infidelity in court. The wives have everything now they wanted - freedom, have sex with anyone anywhere, their business and money ..... but no TRUE LOVE and Real Caring / trust from that one person... have one void known as LOVE... the false empowerment of success and smile behind the guilt of destroying family is something every h03 should feel the shame.
Those 2 men's building career and giving better guidance to their children's. Etc seems a rightful ending. Because here no one actually won or lost.... everyone won and everyone lost...
My whole point is let morals and righful consciousness win rather than any gender. The reason I say so is that even if this is just a fiction, it does add up in one's thought and might give birth to something that shouldn't exist in their mind. As a moral code, give flare to the fantasies, but dont give birth to such fantasies as something to be accepted as OKAY.... because u never know when your words may ruin a person's life in real...
There are many cucks stories where the man stays cuck till the end of story because he has to accept the consequences of being cuck... however characters like PREM or any such character in any story is a REAL MAN. He made mistakes, realized his mistakes and made effort to work it out. That's what being a man is and dont shame such man with a ending where such slut cheating women thinks infidelity is success and empowering.
There are people who want to see their partner with someone else once tbh... but they know that the fantasy as 1 thing and the consequences of it is other thing. its jst a fantasy or a thought, but not every cuck would let any other man have dominance over their own manly ego/ authority.. simple.....
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