Adultery The Husband’s Doubt [Completed]

[lakshana]

Thanks you observed a lot.. I should be cautious in titles so its like setting a different expectations.. yes my initial idea was how the doubts of a husband indirectly pushing his wife to do the exactly the same - affair or cheating he feared. but over the chapters he becomes side character and Nivi become main character.   and for writing it does have taken time but i use to work around some slid plot points make separate chapters and build conversation around it so looks like that make it quick.. but id does eat full day of time.. 


Glad you liked the ending.. for the way i drafted.. 

Also with encouragements in personal boxes and here open chats.. im  planning for Part 2 where Prem will eventually get to know.. i dont know yet bt lets see where it goes

Rather than a sequel you could probably create a different story line. I really liked the way you ended this story giving an open ended conclusion and its for the readers to assume to their thoughts. I for everything liked that you did not unnecessarily created humiliation to the husbands and showed the strength of Nitin & Prem to hold the secrets while knowing that it would ruin the lives. I liked how Aadhil & Rohan were matured not to hurt the family while having pleasure. I liked how you treated the ladies balancing between pleasure and family. This was perfect. Any continuation will actually ruin the story from either side of opinions. Let people assume, the spark would exist for few days and eventually people will be immersed in other stories. They only want a pleasure and will soon be bored if the story line do not fall into their perversion. 
Just my thoughts. I respect your opinions but honestly appreciate your efforts and more so in awe for how you wrote a real good story. it had technicalities, pace, thought provoking elements like mirror. It was a perfect screenplay.