28-01-2026, 07:16 PM
(27-01-2026, 03:05 PM)abcturbine Wrote: Excellent....superb erotica....I would suggest to have a one or two male characters only....the beggar and ranga would be perfect....and let them both fulfill their kindly dreams with erotic beauty pragya...try to add slow seduction and kinkiness with emotionl introspection from lead female character.....it would be burning hot....don't let pragya to fuck anyone....o ly two main characters...their kinkines and beauty of pragya.....take it slow and steady....lot of great potetin the story....superb...also make sure that both characters should have pragya alone for the time being....eagerly waiting for next.......
Your feedback shows how closely you’ve followed the story—thanks for the effort! Suggestions from you and other readers really help me understand what’s resonating. It’s always motivating to see readers connect with the characters. I’ll keep your ideas in mind as I move forward with the core plot I have planned. Keep reading and enjoy what’s coming next!


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