Adultery The Forbidden Relief – My Wife's Secret

[doodhwale_bhaiya]

Superb.... excellent writings.... keep it slow and seductive....let it focused on one male at time...and bhola is perfect....try to add emotional introspection of lead female character...lot of potential for highly erotic erotica.... eagerly waiting for next ..

Hey thanks for the feedback. It really means a lot to keep me going. Can you elucidate the emotional turmoil here? How do you foresee this playing? Simran is under heavy hormonal temptations as such. Ravi's erotion of some amount of attachment is necessary to get him detached and concentrate elsewhere so that all my characters are satisfied someway or the other sexually. Its still in nacent stage. Lots of approach possible here.