25-01-2026, 07:47 PM
(22-01-2026, 06:51 AM)abcturbine Wrote: Great going....your story have lot of potential.....make it slow and retrospective with pragya....and instead of making her slut make her fall in love with koya and fulfill all his dreams of dirtiness and kinkiness...that would be great....
Thanks for sharing your keen observations. I understand your point of view and the flow you highlighted, and I’ll take it into account as I develop the plot according to my planned storyline. Thanks for the support, and please feel free to share feedback anytime—it’s always welcome.


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