Misc. Erotica Paddu an innocent beautiful housewife

[Rocky@handsome]

Instead of just reading and leaving if u guys interact or suggest or advice me i can do little better, else i think no one liked this story and obviously i would lost interest to write this story and stop this.

Let me be very honest — this story has only just begun, so how can we as readers start a proper discussion yet?

Please don’t take it the wrong way. I’m not saying the concept is bad — in fact, I really like the concept a lot! It’s fresh and interesting.
But the thing is… we’ve barely gotten to know the characters properly yet.— Let the story move forward a little, introduce us to the people, build some moments, maybe throw in the first interesting twist or conflict — only then can we truly feel connected and start having meaningful discussions about it.

I want to say it again: the beginning is genuinely strong and the idea has a lot of potential. It’s promising!
Just give it a little more time to breathe and unfold. Readers will automatically start talking, sharing theories, and giving feedback once the story picks up pace.( Sabr rakho — response zaroor aayega. ❤️)

Please don’t take my comment in a negative way at all. This isn’t criticism — it’s just a gentle request for a bit more patience. You’re off to a good start. Keep going! ❤️


Regards 

Rocky!! ❤️