Adultery Priya Didi

[shailu4ever]

"Finally, Ravi slipped gently into her mouth, the kiss deepening as their lips and tongues danced in quite harmony"

Poetry in every sentence is a mark of your excellent command of the subject. Even my mind is delving into romance, while my brain enjoys learning effective words and how they are woven appropriately into sentences.
I respect your English teacher.

Hi Kavyaraja
 
Thank you so much for this incredibly generous feedback. Calling it “poetry in every sentence” is truly an honor, and I’m deeply grateful that the writing resonated with you on both an emotional and an intellectual level.
 
I especially loved how you described the dual experience, your mind drifting into romance while your brain studies the craft itself. That balance between feeling and form is exactly what I strive for: to let the emotion flow naturally while being intentional about word choice, rhythm, and how sentences are woven together.
 
And your final line genuinely made me smile. Any respect given to my English teacher is well deserved, because a love for language, nuance, and expression is something that was carefully nurtured over time. Hearing that it shows in the work is immensely satisfying.
 
Thank you again for reading so attentively and for sharing such a thoughtful response. Feedback like this affirms not just the scene, but the discipline and care behind the writing itself.
 
With warm regards
 
-- Shailu