18-01-2026, 10:24 PM
(18-01-2026, 09:36 PM)qazmlp Wrote: Super Melodrama and you manage to keep the script tight with good dialogues.
Thanks I tried a different ways to write it to reduce melodrama but this seemed like the cleanest way, with the story heading towards the 3 of them leaving the village. I might just continue writing a bit more, time permitting.


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