16-01-2026, 08:02 AM
(15-01-2026, 07:47 AM)Praveen84 Wrote: Koi baat nhi brother aagar Rishita ne bola h ye story ka end nhi start h to kuch soch kar bola hoga ....koi na hopefully kuch socha hoga aakhir writer ki hi story h ye...to use apne hisab se likhne dete h ....bas ek Kami shikayat ya request bolo lekin jo last ka paragraph jha nimi geeta manisa Smita ki chudai wala wo ek sath ki khatam kar diya use todha deeply likha ja skta ta ...jis pta lagta kon si ladki kaha chudi kis se kab chudi kab kab nanga nach hua ....
me to bas writer ko manane ki kosish kar raha tha
itni behtreen story ka end is tarah ,visvaas nahi ho raha , isse badiya to story adhuri rah jaati,kam se kam ek umeed to rahti ki update aa sakta hai


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