[Michel scott]

?Some people like 8-10 people have their negative opinions but majority of people really like your way of story telling, especially this story picking up from this point. you develop the charector slowly and now the adventurous part coming up , so you please continue. Readers stop judging the story in the middle of the story u have to Read the full story and then have to criticize it for its political correctness and all..for now let the creator do his job!!