Adultery Husband's mistake -Wife's bang bang

[Crazyeagle]

This is my first reply and might be first first in this forum. I liked the concept very much. I believe the element of surprise and curiousity is well described which is spice of this story. I won't suggest how it should end as I don't want it to end. Some suggestions which I would like to provide is submissive approach and mix of fear and lust when Athidi surrenders to Gupta, Aggresive and dominating approach of Gupta and a very mild touch of bdsm can be added to make story interesting. You can add different situations where Athidi encounters with different males in different situations can also be useful. Such as she visits local doctor after hangover, local priest of no religion performs erotic rituals can be aspects to look for. Last but not the least and my favourite is force turn consensual. Athidi gradually succumbs to trap laid for him and Kamal. This aspects needs to be handled carefully as it should not hurt any feelings. 
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