14-01-2026, 02:30 AM
After a long time i am responding to a story. I love your writing skills bro.. i love how the wife is slowly evolving with the involuntary encouragement of her husband. i dont know if you intended this story to be dark. But it will be amazing if they both naturally get corrupted just like how it went so far without someone else interpreting and controlling their journey. I would have loved Gupta having access to the computer and seeing everything and even chatting to the hubby later but i wish the gupta controlling the computer and blocking Kamal out.. will it not be more hot that Gupta merely brings out the cuck in Kamal and the need in Aditi and take full advantage of them both rather than controlling or coercing anyone. Kamal is not really a cuck if he is forced into this right???. Speaking being an actual Cucks perspective. and i believe there is more meaning and soul in the story if aditi is connected to Kamal throughout the story even though losing herself in the moment as the character Aditi seems to have a soul in your writing.


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