13-01-2026, 08:20 PM
(13-01-2026, 08:04 PM)RCF Wrote: Your storytelling is a slow burn and a game of patience. One who gets immersed in the sea of emotions will truly cherish but those who cannot swim in it will get demotivated. Hence the few readers who are hooked, such story telling is rare here and wish others see the golden standard this story can set for other stories.
~RCF
Hi RCF Sir
Thank you so much for this deeply perceptive and generous feedback. Calling the story a slow burn and a game of patience means a lot to me, because that is exactly the emotional space I hoped to create. Not every journey is meant to be rushed—some are meant to be felt, step by step.
At the same time, I must admit there is a quiet disappointment when some readers are unable to follow the journey through. As a writer, it does make me pause and reflect. I am actively thinking about how I can make this story more exciting. I have added a few scenes that are intensely erotic at the same time they fit the current story flow properly. I am trying to weave in different scenes with erotic moments that might help readers move through the emotional depth more smoothly, without losing the soul of the story.
You are absolutely right that this kind of storytelling asks the reader to immerse themselves in a sea of emotions. Those who choose to stay and swim through it form a deep connection with the characters—and knowing that you are among those readers means a great deal to me.
Your encouragement and belief in the story, especially your words about it having the potential to set a golden standard, are incredibly motivating. Thank you for understanding, for staying with the story, and for giving me the confidence to keep writing with honesty and patience.
Once again I truly appreciate your help and support and all your ratings to keep me motivated and move forward.
With lots of gratitude and warm regards
-- Shailu


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