[sexypreeti]

Hi ThodaNaughty... thank you for your comments... I really like reading and listening to feedback. It helps me a lot.

Two things I did want to clarify.

One, when I first started writing this story, I was still experimenting and learning how to write a good story. I made a lot of mistakes and learnt, and if I could re-write the story now, I would change some things, especially the first part of the story and cutting out some pieces or changing certain things. I have also made some more mistakes more recently that are troubling me, but I will try to figure those out. That is probably the drawback of writing and posting a story in episodic format, where you cannot go back and fix things if something comes to your mind later.

Second, sorry if I was unable to convey this properly, but there definitely has been some time that passed in the village before Supriya and Iqbal got close. Atleast 6 months in mind, maybe slightly longer. I should have better expressed this in the story, and that will fall into those type of things that I wish I could go back and change.

But after all of those changes, I would probably still be here where we are in the story. With some things expressed better and somethings cut out.

With that said, I think we are getting towards the end of this particular story, not immediately, but definitely its nearer that people may think. Like in the last hour of a 3 hour movie.

I would like to continue to write more stories about some of the characters that we met during the journey and there are atleast 2 distinct stories that have already formed in my head with lesser used characters (they are not who you would think they are). Even though I consciously started writing this story as a sex story, I discovered while writing this story that I enjoyed writing the story element side of it more than the sex scenes. I am still not great at sex scenes. 

I would like to write those other stories as stories first where sex happens naturally as part of those stories, rather than sex being the key thing that drives the story. I think they might not be well received here (too boring), but I will see where to post them once I get along with those.

This is your story and you have every right to write it the way you have intended. Yes it is impossible to satisfy everyone...But at the same time there are many other fans who impatiently wait to read what's going to happen next...

From the time you started this story till now, you have surely turned things around BIG time...Kudos to that...Keep it up