Incest Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale

[xfirefox]

heart throbbing like always, you have completely turned this into an romantic story, I am not complaining. when he's with Indhu it feels more like a boy with a girl thing, and less like a son with mother.

mother son element is also quiet necessary for this story and it's characters to feel more engaging.

this is what I personally feel is that Indhu seems more like a love struk girl than a mother. Everything from her side is being shown from a lovey dovey perspective, but less like a mother who reprimands her children. Indhu's character should be evolved more in a parent-adult way and a bit authoritative persona and behaviour should be a part of her personality.

I understand in a story her character is portrayed more in a passive personality type. but when a responsibilities are there than a passive person do get more dominant and authoritative.

as for this update, very well articulated from Indhu's perspective, and what she feels and what she believes other thoughts about her or her feelings; like she is more concerned about Leka's thoughts for her anf Anu's growing closeness with Karthik and even her confidant Varsha views. many a times she held back when sharing or expressing herself.

will be waiting