Adultery Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani

[Sriya2]

Hi ThodaNaughty... thank you for your comments... I really like reading and listening to feedback. It helps me a lot.

Two things I did want to clarify.

One, when I first started writing this story, I was still experimenting and learning how to write a good story. I made a lot of mistakes and learnt, and if I could re-write the story now, I would change some things, especially the first part of the story and cutting out some pieces or changing certain things. I have also made some more mistakes more recently that are troubling me, but I will try to figure those out. That is probably the drawback of writing and posting a story in episodic format, where you cannot go back and fix things if something comes to your mind later.

Second, sorry if I was unable to convey this properly, but there definitely has been some time that passed in the village before Supriya and Iqbal got close. Atleast 6 months in mind, maybe slightly longer. I should have better expressed this in the story, and that will fall into those type of things that I wish I could go back and change.

But after all of those changes, I would probably still be here where we are in the story. With some things expressed better and somethings cut out.

With that said, I think we are getting towards the end of this particular story, not immediately, but definitely its nearer that people may think. Like in the last hour of a 3 hour movie.

I would like to continue to write more stories about some of the characters that we met during the journey and there are atleast 2 distinct stories that have already formed in my head with lesser used characters (they are not who you would think they are). Even though I consciously started writing this story as a sex story, I discovered while writing this story that I enjoyed writing the story element side of it more than the sex scenes. I am still not great at sex scenes. 

I would like to write those other stories as stories first where sex happens naturally as part of those stories, rather than sex being the key thing that drives the story. I think they might not be well received here (too boring), but I will see where to post them once I get along with those.