(06-01-2026, 03:44 PM)Joker44 Wrote: Haan, concept sahi hai. Normal mom-son story boring ho jaati hai, aur Rahul main lead hai toh cuck wala scene bhi nahi chahiye. Isko full interesting banayenge twists ke saath, aur end tak suspense rakhenge ki Tripti finally kisko milti hai.
Thank you all for the suggesion please enjoy the story and do comments about it to muze pata lgta rahe ki story kesi chl rhi hae..
Actually as rahul is the main lead, jealousy or cuck or losing his beloved mom to only one lucky competitor with twist will take your story to next level.I mean no story will be comparable anymore.Story will be a master standard.
I am actually your fan of writing skill and the concept is also new.Truely one of the best writer on xossipy.Eagerly waiting for your update....
# update next part fast as the story is a bomb my dear......


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