05-01-2026, 12:31 AM
(This post was last modified: 05-01-2026, 12:46 AM by val.coutinho. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Excellent update.... But you should have not made Raj aware of the prying eyes of Karim on Anita so soon.... It should have been hidden from him atleast till some chemistry develops between Karim and Anita..... It would have been a good build up for the story.....
Just a suggestion your the author of the story you might know what's best...
Just a suggestion your the author of the story you might know what's best...


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