03-01-2026, 12:19 AM
(02-01-2026, 04:19 PM)val.coutinho Wrote: Deepak since you asked for a frank suggestion.... Please don't take it wrong, you mentioned Karim taking out phone from his dhoti.... And later his cock gets hard in pajama.... This one glitch caught my attention.... I know you did say something to badegandu in one of the replies to his comment, but believe me I don't want it to happen to me....
I'm sorry if this comment may hurt you but please avoid such errors in the future.....
Thanks for pointing out mistake . I will try to do better job . basically i wrote/modified this chapter three times as i was not satisfied with my earlier version and then wanted to post something near 1st January. Still apology is due . I am reasonable person and can take criticism and do Course correction .
Deepak Kapoor
Author on amazon
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Author on amazon
- An Innocent Beauty Series ( 5 Books )
- सम्मान और बदला ( 5th-Book in hindi)
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