Adultery अनीता सिंह -- किरदार निभाना (Role Play)

[Deepak.kapoor]

"Usne ek kutil muskan di aur phurti se apni dhoti ki jeb se ek purana mobile nikala. Usne turant Google par type kiya—'Saree mein sexy Kajal Aggarwal'. ...

Kaha koun budha naukar google search marta hy ??
Bhai story aur behtar ban sakti hai tu bas thoda aur real aur logical tarike se soch

Mobile is very common in India , most of people have in India . i do not think i have mentioned kareem age , in my mind  he is around 55-60 . if you are so critical , then you can not watch any south Indian movies ,hero fighting 20 guys , cars flying . i can say you can not  watch 80% of Hollywood movies, 90% of Bollywood and Tollywood . You can not read single story on this site.

This is entertainment site . just enjoy and chill with hand on your Lund . That is purpose of these stories .

Hope i am not offending you . but it discourage writer that out of (44 pages in my word doc), you noticed just mistake ,that too was not valid one , you did not make any effort to encourage writer . 

If you can make it better , please go ahead and do it . Just open New thread and start writing . Nobody is stopping you .

Rest in your words be logical , who choses "BadeGANDu" as name . Mine one is too fake, but mine one is bit more logical .