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UPDATE 118
Anita ek washroom mein jaa kar apna kapda change karke dusra salwar kameez pehen li, .....

Anita itni badi besharm aur behaya aurat thi ki ......magar Bhima ke saamne aese haalat mein ya phir Raj ke chacha chachi ke ghar aese haalat mein jaana use theek nahin laga. Use sharm to nahin aa rahi thi magar ek "sanskaar" aur "maryaada" jaanti thi ki kab kaise rehna hai. Badan dikhau kapde pehenna apni jagah thi magar aese chunchi aur gaand ke paas ke kapdo ka aesa sikuda hona alag baat thi.

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Anita Ankit ko beech mein tokti huyi thodi sakhti se boli,"Ankit this is ridiculous. Yeh kya baat huyi ki main kya kar rahi hoon kyun kar rahi hoon yeh sab par dhyaan do?"

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....... Isliye main washroom ke peeche akele mein gayi taaki jaane se pehle woh meri le sake. Jab unhone humara itna madad kiya hai to lena to banta hi hai na. Unko dene ke baad main udhar se washroom chali gayi aur wahan se aa rahi hoon. Ab sunn liya ya aur bhi kuchh jaan na chahte ho Mr. Jasoos?"

Ankit yeh naya naam sunnkar sharminda ho gaya. Woh sharmindgi se bola,"I am sorry bhabhi. Mera iraada.."

Anita use tokti huyi boli,"Iraada jo bhi ho Ankit, this is not acceptable. Ab sabko sunate mat phirna har baat. Mujhe baat ka batangar pasand nahin hai"

......,"Nahin bhabhi I swear main kisi ko kuchh nahin bolunga. Aese bhi yeh bus ka safar koi baatein karne ki cheez hai. Safar khatam baat khatam"

Anita yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi pyaar se boli,"Exactly. Good boy. You finally understood"

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Some cribbing from my side....

Anita besharam aur behaya hai, lekin family ke saamne uski andarooni chhipi hui slut kisi ko na dikhe iska khayal hai usko... Bus me ya market me bhi usko iss baat ki chinta rehti hai ki chahe jo bhi ho uske aur Hariya ke beech wo kisi aur ko na pata chale...chaar diwaron ke beech ek garam aurat aur dumdaar mard jo bhi kare koi kharabi nahi hai lekin kisi ko kaano kaan bhanak nahi honi chahiye aisa Anita ka sochna raha hai... To iss hisaab se wo besharam behaya bebaak hai lekin badchalan nahi hai... Lekin update 120 me you have said twice or thrice ki wo badchalan hai... It doesn't seem consistent.. and badchalan ko paane me wo maza nahi jo ek chhipi hui raand me hai...

Plus Anita ka ek mard ke saath ya aneko mardon ke saath lekin akele akele me duniya se chhupkar milna mazaa deta hai aur mahaul ko kaamuk banata hai ... Lekin ek saath hariya aur Ramu ke sath ye behaviour kahani ko padhne ke maze ko thoda kam kar raha hai kyoki ye Anita ke character se thoda inconsistent hai even considering ki hariya ne continuous efforts se Anita ka behaviour and thinking ko jitna change Kiya hai..wo aurat ko ek taraf apne pati ke alawa kisi se chudi tak nahi shaadi ke pehle bhi to ab wo ek saath do mardon ke saamne aise hote thoda ajeeb lagta hai...

Isme kuch ajeeb nahi hoga ki Hariya ke garam kiye chulhe par koi aur roti sek jaye , shayad ramu ya bheema ya bus wala aadmi lekin chulhe par ek baar me ek hi roti sik sakti hai...kamse kam Anita naamak garam chulhe/tawe me jispar aaj tak Raj ne hi rotiya sek kar apne safed paani se chulhe ko bujhaya hai... 


Cribbing over


Other things I noticed here which are intriguing and I am interested in knowing ki aage kya hoga


Jaise...

Anita bechare Ankit ko daant de rahi hai ab.. bechare ki koi galti bhi nahi.. galti kya wo to apni samajh se sahi hi kar raha tha...apni bhabhi ko uss gunde se bachane wali hi soch thi uski...but usko kya pata uski bhabhi ke andar kya chal raha hai.. Ankit ko isse bura nahi laga? Kya uske andar thodi bhi jigyasa nahi jaagi apne sawalon ka asli jawaab jaan ne ki? Kaash aisa bhi koi angle ho .. ki Ankit ko shak sahi disha me jaaye lekin sabut na hone ki wajah se wo zaada kuch kar nahi paye lekin ye baat uske andar ghar kar jaate aur wo iska faaydatab uthaye jab 10-12 saal baad wo ek tagda mard ban gaya ho aur Anita maybe ek MILF!! Aakhirkar Anita ne usko kuchh chhupane ko bola hai.. jo wo abhi to maan gaya hai lekin reh reh kar usko ye baat yaad aati rahegi shayad ek sawaliya nishan ke sath.


Sabse badi cheez... Anita ye boli ki wo peechhe isliye gayi taaki wo aadmi uski " le sake "... Maze me wo itni beh gayi ya itni bold ho gayi ki wo Ankit ke saamne clearly double meaning baat bol rahi hai...jo Ankit abhi to nahi samjha hai shayad lekin hopefully baad me samjhe...kya Anita Ankit ke muh par Ankit ke anjaane hi uska mazaak uda Rahi hai aise shabd bol kar? Apne khayalon me wo usko kind of humiliate kar rahi hai? Wo uss anjaan aadmi ki dabangai aur mardangi se iss had tak vashh me aa gayi ki wo apne pati ke pariwar ke ek kam umra ke mard ko aise bol rahi hai...Anita ka apna bhai hota to shayad Anita aise nahi bolti na hu use daant lagati... Anita ko bhi shayad Ankit ke saamne aisa bolne me ek ajeeb sa thrill mil raha hai...

Anita us aadmi ko kuch de kar aayi... Paise ke alawa.. wo kya de kar aayi hai?????