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Misc. Erotica ...And My Mother doesn't Remain Ours
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a simple pious small town housewife ruined at the river bank so brutally in the morning that too in her hidden coward son's presence, then her future is already seem grim, god help this family.

now we know how this dude has gotten such a name 'RAMBO'. and he has proved it with flying marks. and it seems she wasn't his first prey. he has done this before, hence the name. and he doesn't seem that stupid as he seems and the way he carried out and the way he left the seen of crime with such a ease it seems he had calculated all this before acting upon it, like must have been following her for the past few days, he must be observing her routine, only after that he's gone with it.

for the lady there seems to be too many things to worry about apart such forced sex, that is disease or hygiene, pregnancy, fear of going out, being alone, guilt, loss of enthusiasm and a fu**ed up psychology and on top of it all which she doesn't even know is her loss of her son (he is good as dead as when in need of time he just stood watching, when should he have died fighting for her no matter what the situation be). has anyone apart from her son has seen what had happened to her, could be problematic in future, blackmail, coercion etc.

lets see how she cops out with what has just happened to her, and how she faces her husband, society and especially herself. would family dynamics be changed for her, what would be her son's perspective from now onwards.

would her husband and daughter observe the change physiological and psychological, a lot to see and happen, story could go in many directions ontoward, time will tell. And what would her son's role going to be, savior, accessor or aggressor. saviour he couldn't be, well we had already seen he stayed behind. aggressor he can't be he's timid. accessor is what i believe he would be for him being a passive personality.

Damn, even i didn't anticipated such an outcome, not in a long shot, writer has just surprised me. let's see what the future hold's for this family.
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RE: ...And My Mother doesn't Remain Ours - by xfirefox - 01-01-2026, 10:04 AM



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