Incest Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale

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excitement his growing, so the chemistry between the characters.
soon the exams will be over, then will see what rewards does Kartik gets to cherish.

but with all this there seems a rising threat of Anu, or in the mind of Indhu. with this kind of insecurity in thoughts what would Indhu do to overcome or surpass.

had to read twice. but still missing Leka. it's an incest story but that doesn't mean that everyone is supposed to have a sexul feelings towards every family members. do show the usual sibling chemistry\rivalry. once in a while do try to dipict their regular life stuff like sharing food, paying bills, watching tv, laundry cleaning, house dusting, decorating house or rooms attending marrige or function, celebrating festival, family dynamics when relatives arrives, then later bitching about them and grinding themselves, each other etc.

buying new scooty for kids college, tution and house work, then Kartik teaching Leka and Indhu. and in situations like these little monents and accidental touches happen which compounded over the time.

things like these bring colour to the story

this story shouldn't only focused on how does kartik and indhu comes close but all the other mundane activities are also

also writer could show characters coversing in italics thier native language, like Indhu-varsha making leud and teasing comments, younger generation talking or making remarks in hindi (i'm northern netizen he he) but should be explained the same in brackets in english so everyone could understand. and especially when Indhu and Kartik do thier heartful talk; it will highlight the intimate aspect and it would create a better reader and character relationship.

carryon.