31-12-2025, 07:39 AM
(31-12-2025, 01:30 AM)Fing fing Wrote: I would recommend to create a twist on story. Every story in every forum ends up in mom-son sex with no reason.Make story complex,dark,cuckson, humiliation,losing close family member to some bully is super erotic.....
Add cuck twist like inspite of rahul(son) have control over tripti(mom),muscular bully abhay and vikki to have intense fight for her.Abhay is so strong that rahul(son) fear to confront him. Winner abhay by hook or crook make tripti to be his girlfriend while viki make temporary gf with kriti or shital. Rahul with much difficulty gets a new gf later on but she is not so sexy as tripti.
Make abhay and tripti elected as fresher no 1 of college and make them CR(class monitor) of the section A along with rahul(son) in same section.Rahul feels jealous about her mom tripti because abhay as a cr never miss any opportunity to hit his mom. Initially at first rahul(son) and tripti(mom) sits together but abhay bullied rahul and played trick to sit with tripti.
Add a fight scene between rahul and abhay when rahul(son) wanted to take back his mom from strong abhay but failed.Instead tripti saved rahul(son) from abhay wrath by assuring abhay that she is her girlfriend only.Even teacher in college think abhay is potential mate for tripti(mom).
Abhay is so possesive about his mom( tripti) that he fight with any potential mate to eradicate risk of losing her.For tripti it become very difficult to meet with rahul(son), but in her mind she started to like abhay as macho man.
Add Forcing tripti to sit with him(abhay)in class ,calling her for group study along with rahul,tution,suddenly taking tripti(mom) on college gent toilet, .......add cuckson, intense fucking, betrayal,abhay drinking tripti milk, later on add a marriage between tripti and bully abhay................
SUCH A SUPER HOT AND NICE STORY,ADD TWIST RATHER THAN NORMAL MOM -SON STORY.(ONE THING ADD TRIPTI WITH ABHAY ONLY).I HAVE GIVEN MY SUGGGESTION,NOW IT'S UPTO WRITER TO CONSIDER.ANYWAY ...YOU WRITING SKILL IS VERY GOOD
i agree with you....
i want to this ... yes bro..... i like it...


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