Adultery The Swamiji: The Ashram of the Sacred Angels

[shailu4ever]

The "Story of O" is a BDSM classic originally written in French, happily translated into French. Read it in my early twenties. Then there's the Victorian erotica like The Pearl, the young turk. Justine by Marcus deSade after which the word sadism is coined.

Anyway, I do enjoy your writing. My honest feedback is it's a bit slow, which is okay, as long as the sex scenes are explosive.

Hi Masti.bhai

Thank you for sharing those references, I must admit I haven’t read any of those stories yet, but I’ll see if I can get my hands on them, though I’m not sure how soon. I really appreciate your honest feedback about the pace. Yes, the story does move a bit slowly initially, but I promise the momentum will build, and the romantic scenes will become more intense as the story progresses. I’m glad you’re enjoying it so far, and your perspective means a lot.

With warm regards

-- Shailu