29-12-2025, 12:39 PM
(29-12-2025, 12:24 PM)heygiwriter Wrote: Sometimes the story cannot move forward if we think too much.. For the story which i have envisioned.. i need some justifications to keep their characters fall from disgrace so that i the story can give them a better chances.. if i consider this point seriously i have to withdrew some plot points that i have envisioned. so i just appeal you to spare my story characters for sometime :)
I understand, I am not criticizing your writing or story, I am only saying for a character like Nivi who has fallen for an extramarital affair once, the onus if not to be heavy on her as her fault there need to be more circumstances than simple late to a date from her husband as a reason for her heart break to fall into the pit again. I am sure now since Rohan got her well into his control second time, he openly made her agree to be his pet from now on, so there won't be second chance for her to love her husband, here and out she will do lot of things under his nose with Rohan...the plot to be falling into such a pit felt short for me, thats all.
Anyways, another great story in this site to engage us more. I appreciate the efforts and giving us your valuable time and ink. Only request is not to make this a cuckold story, there are just far too many here that is causing lot of distaste recently.
~RCF



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