Adultery The Husband’s Doubt [Completed]

[heygiwriter]

I like that you are one of the few writers who are very engaging with the readers , and actually acknowledging the suggestion given by them , and trying to or added it into your story , and then publishing the update in just a day . 

Also the summary part and characters list you posted was good thing . I hope you do that after every 10 updates . Makes easier to recall the story . 

I wanna say you are going great , Every chapter holds the same standard and consistency is too good . Even though the suggestion were great ,  I dont want you to deviate from the original IDEA/PLOT . 

Also Like  How you Pen the PREM's CHARACTER . A lover . which is very APT . A man who is trying to change . Too bad the story is cuckold story , PREM IS GONNA BE CUCKOLD .   . I hope he willingly become cuck and not  Co hearse into it . His whole life His instinct kept him and His family safe but also created lots of problem , and Now When he ignored his instinct, They got him . Also Guy traded his wife for KIA SELTOS ( Rohan drives Mercedes but told her mistress to get KIA for her HUSBAND , was it intentional   )  , She did him dirty , TWICE , By fucking His business partner and then buying him a car which is KIA . At least get him some LUXURY SEDAN or something   Just Kidding . 

NIVI's character action is justified , but I hope you dont use that usual trope of cheating wife . I LOVE MY HUSBAND AND FUCK MY LOVER. Her character has shown her own struggle and dilemma so I think it should not be undone just because in future PREM's became a GOOD husband at the end and she went back to being GOOD LOYAL HOUSEWIFE . 

Yes , about the characters , Too Many characters which is fine no problem , It is just Their motives are not so different , Maybe it is too soon , In future we may get to know . 

But over all . THIS IS A GREAT STORY . Excited for the Next UPDATE . I wonder how do you write so fast   without compromising the quality of the updates .  

And I might be in the Minority , But the EROTIC portion is just fine , No need for the exaggeration . But of course it would not hurt to get some more   .

Waiting for Next UPDATES !!!!!!!! 

( Comment is just for fun ) 

Thanks :)