Incest Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale
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(05-12-2025, 01:04 AM)xfirefox Wrote: lovely .. a shopping spree .. Rajan will be pulverized if he even gets a inkling of what the mother son duo has bought so far, or more precisely what Kartik will buy for his mother, will shook the core of Mrs. Rajan. well her stomach is all along been fluttering, but what he is about to do with grand mother's backup gift money will definately give the mild heart to Indhu or the purchase may set the fire in her pants or something that they covers. till now money has been well spent, but guessing kartik isn't going to spend every paisa on just the clothes, he must have thought of something else, out of box thing, which might surprise the readers.

enjoyed it so far and looking forward.

(26-12-2025, 05:09 PM)xfirefox Wrote: took your time, i would say quite a time. anyway Indhu and her family is here, but the wrong person (or i would say the right person) got the scent of the feelings of the would be affair that is shimmering in the nubile hearts of our cute couple of the day.

well it would be amazing to see how will\well the notorious Varsha be pulling and caliberating the strings to bring the both together.

the way story is being articulated, it seems it is going to be a long affair with Kartik to achieve his true potential both at academics as well as homely affair along with his mother to be self dependent.

i am looking forward to the journey of the blessed souls to get through their briyani-tandoori life.

do not undermine Leka while Kartik and indhu's life progress. I see her as a involving character who should play a crucial role all along the story line as it progresses.

liked the efforts been put by writer with the presentation of this update. the story is evolving at a right pace and direction with a right amount of spice and emotional concoction.

don't take so long to post the upcoming updates.

Thanks for your valuable feedbacks this helps me write future parts. Thanks. Keep supporting.
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RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by Akhilaa - 05-12-2025, 12:11 PM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by BiratKj - 08-12-2025, 09:41 AM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by BiratKj - 08-12-2025, 07:49 PM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by nivithenaughty - 27-12-2025, 07:39 AM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by Sage_69 - 31-12-2025, 02:03 PM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by Sage_69 - 06-01-2026, 07:01 AM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by dk1235 - 16-01-2026, 06:28 AM



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