Adultery The Husband’s Doubt [Completed]

[DeanWinchester00007]

Thank you for the detailed response.. I wanted the story to keep close to realism.. whenever i open xossipy most of the stories are like he is a husband there is an alpha and instantly he get between her legs.. I'm a person who kind of searching a nice plot.. a plot that makes their decision as choice. So i tried to bring in a proper plot like few of really good stories here. And i believe i done it so far.. To me I'm always with people like Prem. They just don't know how to love properly they know but they stuck somewhere and they have some reasons.. at least in my story i don't want to get him humiliated straight.. may be subtly. but he is trying to win her back will be there graciously..  coming to your questions  Answers : A . I'm trying to pen Prem as lover nothing more nothing less. he is not alpha or loser he is jst a lover who wanted to get her back B. I cannot answer it directly as it may spoil your reading experience surprise etc.. C. Some ideas are really good.. let me see if i can get that inside if it can match into existing scenarios i have already writing.. D. Few characters do come.. and they strongly has a purpose.. Yes there is sex.. there is cheating but the characters and the invovlement make it a point for some important decisions the husband and wife will make independently for their better. and the prakash character i saw teh confusion,, the new prakash is Nithin Prakash and not just prakash.. The first prakash was the predator who is colleague of prem. Nithin Prakash is Prems s chool mate.  E . Im trying too :)

I like that you are one of the few writers who are very engaging with the readers , and actually acknowledging the suggestion given by them , and trying to or added it into your story , and then publishing the update in just a day . 

Also the summary part and characters list you posted was good thing . I hope you do that after every 10 updates . Makes easier to recall the story . 

I wanna say you are going great , Every chapter holds the same standard and consistency is too good . Even though the suggestion were great ,  I dont want you to deviate from the original IDEA/PLOT . 

Also Like  How you Pen the PREM's CHARACTER . A lover . which is very APT . A man who is trying to change . Too bad the story is cuckold story , PREM IS GONNA BE CUCKOLD .   . I hope he willingly become cuck and not  Co hearse into it . His whole life His instinct kept him and His family safe but also created lots of problem , and Now When he ignored his instinct, They got him . Also Guy traded his wife for KIA SELTOS ( Rohan drives Mercedes but told her mistress to get KIA for her HUSBAND , was it intentional   )  , She did him dirty , TWICE , By fucking His business partner and then buying him a car which is KIA . At least get him some LUXURY SEDAN or something   Just Kidding . 

NIVI's character action is justified , but I hope you dont use that usual trope of cheating wife . I LOVE MY HUSBAND AND FUCK MY LOVER. Her character has shown her own struggle and dilemma so I think it should not be undone just because in future PREM's became a GOOD husband at the end and she went back to being GOOD LOYAL HOUSEWIFE . 

Yes , about the characters , Too Many characters which is fine no problem , It is just Their motives are not so different , Maybe it is too soon , In future we may get to know . 

But over all . THIS IS A GREAT STORY . Excited for the Next UPDATE . I wonder how do you write so fast   without compromising the quality of the updates .  

And I might be in the Minority , But the EROTIC portion is just fine , No need for the exaggeration . But of course it would not hurt to get some more   .

Waiting for Next UPDATES !!!!!!!! 

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