26-12-2025, 09:45 PM
Heloo writer,
Hope you are doing great i had read your story till now its good and as i read above one reader detail review in story i just want to add one point there is very thin line in love and lust as i read many story every one make a husband so helpless that ki man hi nahi karta padhne ka kyu ki realty me ye nahi hota hai so keep it little realstic.
1) As Nivi is enjoying his friend rohan company let pream also get some one like it he also desearve such experiance not constantly but in middle .
2) Wife should never ignoer husband and never keep lover first becuase in 8 year rohan came back but pream was there when nivi need a most .(becuase in 8 years there is routene was seted where couple are not attractive toward sex with same person ,Higher in case of husband and this is harsh realty which should not happen but its happening ,so if you can keep double cheating where both party are living doual life where pream vet knowledge of nivi and rohan sex so he also do same for him and keeping harmony in home )
3) and i request this should be cheeting story wbere both husband and wife do cheating dont make it chuck its a worst part in storys.
And rest upon you Ap nirmata hai or nirmata ko nirdash dene wale hum kon hote hai so agar kuch bura lage to maff kar dena mera mana or kehna shirf itna hai agar patni husband se boar hogai hai to Husband bhi wife se boar ho skata hai so do as per your wish but dont make chuck .
Hope you are doing great i had read your story till now its good and as i read above one reader detail review in story i just want to add one point there is very thin line in love and lust as i read many story every one make a husband so helpless that ki man hi nahi karta padhne ka kyu ki realty me ye nahi hota hai so keep it little realstic.
1) As Nivi is enjoying his friend rohan company let pream also get some one like it he also desearve such experiance not constantly but in middle .
2) Wife should never ignoer husband and never keep lover first becuase in 8 year rohan came back but pream was there when nivi need a most .(becuase in 8 years there is routene was seted where couple are not attractive toward sex with same person ,Higher in case of husband and this is harsh realty which should not happen but its happening ,so if you can keep double cheating where both party are living doual life where pream vet knowledge of nivi and rohan sex so he also do same for him and keeping harmony in home )
3) and i request this should be cheeting story wbere both husband and wife do cheating dont make it chuck its a worst part in storys.
And rest upon you Ap nirmata hai or nirmata ko nirdash dene wale hum kon hote hai so agar kuch bura lage to maff kar dena mera mana or kehna shirf itna hai agar patni husband se boar hogai hai to Husband bhi wife se boar ho skata hai so do as per your wish but dont make chuck .


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