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Thriller BEHEN_CODE
#92
Update 52



Next Day – Mission Day

Subah ka waqt.
Sheher ki hawa me ek ajeeb si ghabrahat thi… jaise sheher khud jaanta ho ki aaj kuch hone wala hai.


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Scene: Morning Prep – Parallel Cuts

Cut 1: Rahat
Rahat mirror ke saamne khadi hai. Simple kurti, dupatta neatly pinned.
Face par calm, lekin aankhon ke andar tufaan.

Rahat (inner monologue):
“Kal court hai… Vicky ke liye.
Aur parso Avantika ke liye.
Do din… bas do din.
Aaj agar hum chook gaye, to sirf hum nahi—bahut si awaazein hamesha ke liye chup ho jayengi.”

Wo apna phone uthati hai. BEHEN_CODE group par last message check karti hai.
No new texts.
Sab apni-apni jagah ready hain.


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Cut 2: Ishani
Ishani scooty start karti hai. Helmet pehente waqt wo ek second rukti hai.
Aankhon me kal raat ke flashbacks… bachpan, maa-baap, tanhaai…
Phir ek gehri saans.

Ishani (khud se):
“Aaj darr ka option nahi hai.”

Scooty road par nikal jaati hai.


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Cut 3: Arti
Kitchen me chai bana rahi hai.
Saans normal, haath steady—lekin mann bhari hua.

Abhishek newspaper padh raha hai.

Abhishek:
“Aaj library thoda late khol rahi ho?”

Arti halki si muskaan ke saath bolti hai—
“Hmm… thoda kaam hai.”

Wo jaanti hai—yeh jhoot shayad sabse bhaari jhoot hai jo usne kabhi bola hai.


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Scene: Meeting Point – Late Morning

Ek neutral commercial area, Rathod ke office se zyada door nahi.
Teeno—Rahat, Ishani, Arti—alag-alag directions se aakar milti hain.
Koi hugs nahi. Koi unnecessary baat nahi.

Sirf aankhon ka contact.
Aur ek silent understanding—aaj peeche mudna allowed nahi.


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Scene: The Plan – Recap in Motion (Visual Explanation)

Rahat (low voice, precise):
“Office ke ground floor par visitors ka flow zyada hota hai.
Ishani—tum distraction create karogi.”

Ishani nods.

Ishani:
“Argument type. Loud but legal. Reception aur security dono busy.”

Arti:
“Main accounts floor tak jaungi.
Waha se service corridor.
Vault ka access wahi se hai.”

Rahat Arti ki taraf dekhti hai—
“Timer mere haath me hoga.
7 minutes se zyada hum ek jagah nahi rahenge.”

Arti (firm):
“Vault khulne ke baad sirf Avantika ka data.
Extra hero banne ka koi shauk nahi.”

Ek second ki khamoshi.

Rahat:
“Mobile silent.
Agar main ‘RED’ bolu—abort.
Agar ‘GREEN’—complete.”

Teeno ek dusre ki taraf dekhti hain.

Ishani (half-smile):
“Bas itna hi?
Chalo phir… kaam shuru karein.”


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Scene: Rathod’s Office – Exterior

Glass building.
Polished. Powerful.
Bilkul waisi hi jaise andar ka sach—thanda aur khatarnaak.

Camera upar ki taraf pan karta hai.
Security tight hai, lekin routine me bandhi hui.

Teeno alag-alag entry points ki taraf badh jaati hain.


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Scene: Entry Begins

Reception area.

Ishani tez kadmon se andar aati hai, phone par baat karte hue—
“Aap log har baar yahi karte ho!
Meeting confirm thi!”

Receptionist confuse.
Security guard aage badhta hai.

Ishani:
“Main legal notice bhej dungi, samjhe?”

Volume badhta jaata hai.
Eyes uspe jam jaati hain.


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Cut: Arti
Side entrance se calmly andar.
Visitor pass.
Confidence aisa jaise yeh building uski ho.


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Cut: Rahat
Lift me enter karti hai.
Button press.
Floor indicator upar ja raha hai.

Rahat (inner voice):
“Bas ek sahi mauka…
Aur sach khud bolne lagega.”


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End Beat

Lift ding karti hai.
Camera Rahat ke chehre par freeze hota hai—focused, fearless.

TEXT ON SCREEN:
“MISSION STARTED.”

Mission Day – Vault Operation (Continuation)


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Scene: Vault Floor – Inside Rathod’s Office

Rahat lift se utarti hai.
Floor par halka security presence, cameras discreetly aligned.
Wo dheere se corridor me kadam badhati hai, eyes sharp, breathing controlled.

Rahat (inner monologue):
“Bas ek galti aur sab khatam.
Har guard, har camera… bas focus aur timing.”


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Scene: Arti – Service Corridor

Arti quietly apne route se chalti hai.
Service corridor se vault room ki taraf.
Access panel samne aata hai.
Wo scan karti hai security patterns ka.

Arti (low whisper):
“7 minutes. Phir koi bhi aage nahi dekh sakta.
Data nikalna hai, aur exit safe.”

Wo vault ke pass ke camera feed check karti hai—light blinking ekdam timing ke saath synced.


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Scene: Ishani – Distraction

Ishani reception me loud argument create karti hai.
Phone me dialogue repeat karti hai—ek irritating, repetitive voice tone.
Receptionist aur nearby guard irritated ho jaate hain, attention divert ho jaata hai.

Ishani (inner monologue):
“Focus Rahat aur Arti par.
Yahan meri performance sirf ek minute ke liye… par woh minute sab kuch badal dega.”


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Scene: Vault Access

Arti panel ke samne khadi hai.
Card swipe… beeping.
Vault ka door slowly unlock hota hai.
Arti signal deti hai Rahat ko—Green.

Rahat aage badhati hai, gloves pehenti hai, camera cover karti hai apne hand se.
Inside Vault: computers, hard drives, confidential files.

Rahat quickly Avantika ka file locate karti hai.
USB ready.

Rahat (inner voice):
“Bas, ye file aur evidence… aur hum safe.”


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Scene: Unexpected Glitch

Vault ka ek small camera blink karta hai—pattern mismatch.
Rahat pause karti hai.
Arti ka signal—“Focus, timing.”
Ishani bhi distraction continue rakhti hai reception me.

Rahat USB slot me dalti hai… slow seconds… computer data copy start.


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Scene: Riza – Shadow Move

Parallel scene: Riza rooftop pe observation.
Binoculars se Rathod office monitor karta hai.
Guard aur camera routines check karta hai.
Riza phone me update bhejta hai:
“Subject entered vault. Initiate follow.”


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Scene: Vault Tension

Computer beep… copying 50% complete.
Rahat ka face tense.
Arti corridor me ready.
Ishani ab bhi argue kar rahi hai—guards ka attention total diverted.

Rahat (inner monologue):
“2 minutes aur…
Bas 2 minutes.”


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End Beat:
Computer screen blink karta hai—copy complete.
Rahat USB nikalti hai, gloves cover se hata deti hai.
Arti signal deti hai “Exit Now.”

Freeze frame:
Rahat USB haath me, vault door slowly close ho raha hai.

Scene: Mission – Trap!

Arti, Rahat, aur Ishani stealth mode me floor se group exit tak silently move kar rahi thi. Guard ke patrols unusually sparse the; shayad Rathod ke attention abhi kisi aur cheez me tha. Teenon ke chehre par ek focused seriousness thi, har step calculated, har breath controlled.

Jaise hi wo office ke exit ke paas pahunche, ek sudden sound unke ears me gun ki tarah lagi – SUV engines ka roar corridor ke end se aata hai. Teen se char black SUVs ekdum precise formation me unke saamne rukti hain.

Arti ka heartbeat tez ho gaya. Rahat aur Ishani instinctively piche thodi peeche ho gayi. SUV ke doors ek saath open hote hain aur instantaneously unhe pakad kar andar pull kiya ja raha hai. Ek dam sudden, jaise sab kuch slow motion me ho raha ho.

“Chhodo! Chhodo!” Arti chillati hai, lekin ek muscular guard unke haath se pakad kar seat me forcefully daal deta hai.

Rahat aur Ishani resist karne ki koshish karti hain, maar-dhaad aur struggle ke bawajood, guards ka grip iron-tight hai. Sir par ek kapda jaldi se daal diya jata hai – darkness aur confusion me teenon ki aankhein wide open hai, par kuch dikh nahi raha.

SUV ka engine roar karta hai aur car ekdum speed me nikal padti hai. Teenon ki chhillaahatein corridor me gun ki tarah echo kar rahi hain, lekin koi unki help ke liye nahi aa raha.

Car ke andar:

Arti, Rahat aur Ishani ek doosre ki taraf dekhti hain, fear aur anger mix expression ke saath.

Sir par kapda aur restraints ki wajah se unke movements limited ho gaye hain.

SUV ke andar guards ka formation itna perfect hai ki escape ka koi chance nahi dikh raha.


SUV dheere-dheere ek purane makaan ke saamne rukti hai, shayad Rathod ke kisi godown ke andar.
Guards teeno ko car se utarte hain, lekin sir par kapda abhi bhi hai.
Arti, Ishani aur Rahat chup-chaap, apne andar tension aur gussa ko daba ke, ek dusre ke saath ghuto par beth jaati hain.

Ek kuch second ki khamoshi ke baad, ek heavy, dark aur villainous awaaz gunjti hai:

Riza:
"Welcome ladies, to my guest house. Main aksar logo ko yahi rakhta hu."

Arti, Ishani aur Rahat sirf sun rahi thi, abhi bhi unke sir par kapda hai.

Riza:
"Maaf karna, mere guards thode rough hain isliye tumhe utha kar le aaye, lekin kya kare… tum sabne kaam hi aisa kiya hai. Duniya bhar ki ladkiyo ko bachane ka theka liya hai tum logo ne… lekin kabhi socha hai ki tumhe kaun bachayega?"

Riza apne guards ko ek ishara karta hai.
Teeno ke sir se kapda hataya jaata hai…

Aur jaise hi kapda girta hai, Arti, Ishani aur Rahat ki aankhein fati ki fati reh jaati hain.
Unke samne jo scene tha, usse dekh kar unka dimaag shayad thoda freeze ho jaata hai…

Jaise hi Arti, Ishani aur Rahat ke chehre se kapda hat-ta hai, unki aankhein fati ki fati reh jaati hain.

Unke samne, ek kursi par Avantika aur Anisha bandhi hui thi, dono ke chehre aur haath khoon se lathpath the. Shayd guards ne unka yeh haal kiya tha.

Aur wahi thodi doori par, Kabeer ghayal pada tha. Uske pure kapde, face aur body khoon se lathpath the, aur wo apni halat me zameen par adha pada tha.

Rahat, Arti aur Ishani ka dil tez dhadakne lagta hai, aur unke haath kaanpne lagte hain.

Tabhi unke piche se ek dark aur heavy awaaz gunjti hai:

Riza:
"Kaisa laga, baby surprise?"

Aur jaise hi woh Riza unke samne aata hai, teeno ko samajh nahi aata ki kya ho raha hai.

Riza:
"Tum bas isko bachane ke liye itni mehnat kar rahi thi…"

Teeno apni nazar Avantika ki taraf daalti hain, jo abhi bhi kursi par bandhi aur kamzor hai.

Riza:
"Chalo, main itna hi bolta hu. Ab aage ka kaam mere yeh sher karenge."

Arti, Rahat aur Ishani aas-paas nazar daudati hain aur dekhti hain ki 40-50 guards ek sath unki taraf badh rahe hain.
Teeno abhi bhi ghutno ke bal beti, aur haath bandhe hue hain.

Anisha, Arti ki aankhon me dekhti hai jaise ki wo darr rahi ho.
Arti aankhon se ishara karti hai calm rehne ka.

Riza dheere-dheere aage badhta hai aur teeno ke sath rakhe bags ko khol kar dekhne lagta hai.
Usme USB drives, nakli IDs aur dusri jaroori cheezein milti hain.
Wo USB ko uthata hai aur apne pairon se kuchal deta hai.

Teeno ladkiyan tension me use aisa karte hue dekh rahi thi.

Guards ab un tino ke bilkul nazdeek aa chuke the.

Tabhi Riza bolta hai…

Riza thodi der un teeno ko dekhta rehta hai, fir apna gaal scratch karte hue bolta hai—

Riza:
“Hmm… aise to maza nahi aayega.”

Wo paas khade ek guard ko ishare se bulata hai.

Riza:
“Inke haath khol de.”

Guard aage badhta hai aur Ishani, Rahat aur Arti ke haathon ki rassi ek-ek karke khol deta hai.

Riza halki si muskurahat ke saath bolta hai—

Riza:
“Main yeh dekhna chahta hoon…
sheher ki laundiyon ko bachane wali yeh team
aakhir bachati kaise hai.”

Jaise hi haath aazad hote hain,
Ishani, Rahat aur Arti ek hi saans me Anisha aur Avantika ki taraf bhagti hain.

Pal bhar me Anisha aur Avantika ke bandhan khul jaate hain.

Ab chaaro ladkiyaan aazad hain.

Wo turant charo dishaon me face karke khadi ho jaati hain,
beech me kursi par Avantika kamzor si baithi hai.

Charo ladkiyaan apni pith se pith laga leti hain,
Avantika ko beech me le kar —
jaise ek zinda deewar ban gayi ho.

Guards dheere-dheere bilkul kareeb aa chuke hote hain…

Tabhi achanak—

ek aur SUV aa kar zor se rukti hai.

Sabki nazar udhar mudti hai.

SUV ka darwaza khulta hai…
aur andar se Inspector Zeeshan utarta hai.

Riza ek eyebrow upar karta hai.

Riza:
“Tu yahan kya kar raha hai, Zeeshan?”

Zeeshan ek villainous laugh hasta hai.

Zeeshan:
“Bas dekhna chahta tha…
inki wajah se meri nokri gayi,
to socha dekh loon in ladkiyon ka kya haal hota hai.”

Riza zor se hasta hai.

Riza:
“Saale, do kodi ki nokri ke liye itna bhara baitha hai?
Usse zyada to tune Rathod ke talwe chaat kar kama liya hoga.”

Zeeshan ek tedhi si smirk deta hai.

Zeeshan:
“Bade miyan to bade miyan…
chhote miyan khair chhodo.
Jab bada kutta hi chaat raha hai,
to main kyun peeche rahoon?”

Yeh sunte hi Riza ke chehre ke expression badal jaate hain.
Uski aankhon me ek pal ke liye andhera sa tair jata hai.

Zeeshan aage badh kar bolta hai—

Zeeshan:
“Arey… chup kyun ho gaye, sir?
Sabko maloom hai aapne apni duty kaise ki thi.”

Riza thandi saans leta hai.

Riza:
“Chal chhod…
tujhe badla lena hai na in sabse?
Chal… pehle tu le.
Pasand kar le koi bhi ek laundiya.”

Zeeshan dheere-dheere chaaro ladkiyon ko upar se neeche tak dekhta hai…
ek-ek chehra… ek-ek aankh…

Phir aakar Arti ke saamne ruk jata hai.

Riza ke chehre par ek halki si smile aa jaati hai.

Zeeshan Arti ki aankhon me aankhein daal kar bolta hai—

Zeeshan:
“Tu in sabki head lagti hai…
pehli bali teri hi chadhegi.”

Zeeshan apna haath peeche kheenchta hai—

Aur ek zor ka thappad Arti ke chehre par padta hai.

Arti door jaakar zameen par gir jaati hai.

Zeeshan gusse me aage badhta hai,
Arti ko baalon se pakad kar upar uthata hai—

Aur phir—

ek ke baad ek…
2… 3… 4… 5…

itne tez thappad,
ki hawa bhi kaanp jaaye.

Arti ka sir jhatkon se hilta hai…
lekin wo ek shabd bhi nahi bolti.

Rahat, Ishani aur Anisha ka chehra tight ho jata hai.
Aankhon me gussa, dard aur bechaini…
lekin pair jaise zameen me jam gaye ho.

Scene wahi ruk jaata hai…
saans roak dene wali khamoshi ke saath.
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