26-12-2025, 11:27 AM
Nice build up, excellent expression and beautifully conclude... All the new writter should notice that each update is connecting the story it's not sounding like jump in the story. There is not sudden entry of another person hamid is friend of rajesh. If rajesh is going to take revanhe then rajesh can get entry through hamid MR.Wolf excellent and explaning each seen writing. Congratulations bro.
बर्बादी को निमंत्रण
https://xossipy.com/thread-1515.html
Hawas ka ghulam
https://xossipy.com/thread-33284-post-27...pid2738750
द मैजिक मिरर (THE MAGIC MIRROR) ( Unexpected Desire of Darkness ) PART-II
https://xossipy.com/thread-70677-post-60...pid6048878
https://xossipy.com/thread-1515.html
Hawas ka ghulam
https://xossipy.com/thread-33284-post-27...pid2738750
द मैजिक मिरर (THE MAGIC MIRROR) ( Unexpected Desire of Darkness ) PART-II
https://xossipy.com/thread-70677-post-60...pid6048878


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