Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife

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Meaning?

Meaning something other than just dialogues and stares. Else it would be somewhat of a letdown. Build-up of eroticism and sexual tension has to lead somewhere. There is a noticeable change in Anita's demeanour. Earlier she was scared when there was suddenly risk of exposure or had her heart and breath racing when some boundary was crossed or something very crude/explicit was said by Hariya or that man on the bus or Ramu now. Now she is completely nonchalant. From a complete refusal for a blowjob during the first journey, to extended blowjob and allowing him to poke at her unguarded gaand ka chhed, there has been a major change. There has been a major change. With Hariya it is understandable, he has laid the seed, has watered the sapling, so when Anita bared her breasts for him to suck, it was just harvest from his earlier toil. 

Ramu did a hamla on an akeli Anita. No reaction there. No consequences. I am fully in agreement with your decision to remove Jeetu, because that seemed to be 2 women, one who is delaying the act with Hariya as much as possible, while the other who is never not pinned down to the floor by Jeetu during the day with her legs open and skywards while Jeety drills. It seemed inconsistent. But same Anita had a reaction when Jeetu made the first advance. A slap. A reprimand. Something.

For this bus guy, I can understand that him slapping the manager for disrespecting Anita is definitely a factor, but Anita's sudden openness to him seems disproportionately higher. Earlier, she had monologues with herself, debating, denying and justifying. She did actively trying to put thoughts of Hariya's auzaar out of her mind when fucking her husband, so whe knows some boundaries even if she is not a damsel in distress type of woman. The presence of boundaries is what makes the events erotic when they are crossed. If there are no stakes, then there is notuch fun. Situations present themselves which allow for those boundaries to be crossed under the cover of darkness, the behind of a bus seat, a covered auto seat, a soon saan ghar isolated from praying eyes.

My other point is... Repetitiveness of dialogues increases sexual tension if it leads somewhere.. it can be a climax or an anticlimax, but not neither of the 2, which seems to have happened here. Repetitiveness for repetitiveness sake would only make seemingly long updates actually devoid of much substance. The updates sometime slow down to a crawl because of the repetitiveness, which breaks the illusion.

None of this is to deny that the story is only a side activity for you which you do when you get time, and it will have gaps between updates as long as you need without giving any justification to any reader or any reader having the right to demand updates.

For others who are "inspired" by the story and using it to write their own updates.. i think you can simply ignore them. Aise kitne aaye kitne Gaye. Will not matter. Harry Potter belongs to Rowling, Middle Earth to Tolkien and Game of Thrones to Martin. We know what happens when someone else writes. As per me, Anita belongs to you. Others can get "inspired", after all, Anita Singh is a common name, but that doesn't make the person same.