Thriller BEHEN_CODE

[Greenwood]

Update 48



Next Update – Parallel Nights

Arti ka Ghar – Late Night

Abhishek gehri neend me tha.
Uski saanson ki rhythm room me ek ajeeb si shanti bhar rahi thi.
Lekin Arti abhi bhi jaag rahi thi.

Rahat ke upar wale floor tak pahunchne se pehle ki
har chhoti–badi information uske paas thi,
lekin uske baad…
Abhishek,
uski saas,
ghar ka kitchen,
ghar ke roz ke rules—
sab kuch mission ke beech me ek distraction ban gaya tha.

Wo Abhishek ke baju me leti hui thi,
aankhein band…
lekin dimaag jaag raha tha.

Kabhi uske khayalon me
Rahat, Ishani, Anisha aa jaati,
kabhi Avantika ka chehra.

Kuch soch itni negative thi
ki uska dil zor se dhadakne lagta—
agar kuch galat ho gaya to?

Aur kuch soch aisi
jo use khud ko sambhalne ko kehti—
wo sab strong hain… sab theek hoga.

Arti is waqt
poori confusion aur bechaini me thi.

Tabhi…
? phone ka message tone bajta hai.

Wo turant phone uthati hai.
Screen par BEHEN_CODE group khula hota hai.

Rahat ka message:
“Mission accomplished.
Now back to home safely.”

Message padhte hi
jaise Arti ke seene par rakha bhaari bojh hat jaata hai.

Uski aankhon me halki si nami aati hai,
lekin chehre par sukoon.

Wo phone ko side me rakhti hai,
Abhishek ka haath apni taraf kheenchti hai,
aur dheere se
uske haath par apna sir rakh leti hai.

Is baar uski neend
gehri hoti hai…
bila kisi darr ke.


---

Farmhouse – Same Night

Idhar farmhouse par
party abhi bhi poore shor par thi.
Music, lights, laughter—
sab kuch waise hi chal raha tha
jaise kuch hua hi na ho.

Rathod ab poori tarah nashe me tha.

Ek private room me,
uske saath ek aadmi tha—
foreign accent, foreign suit…
ek American businessman.

Room ke andar ka mahaul
heavy aur claustrophobic tha.

Wahi ladki,
jo pehle hotel room me Rathod ke saath dekhi gayi thi,
ab bhi wahin thi—
chehra thaka hua,
aankhon me ek forced smile.

American uski taraf badhta hai.
Ladki ek pal ke liye
Rathod ki taraf dekhti hai.

Rathod glass uthaye hue
sirf ek chhota sa ishara karta hai—
jaise sab kuch normal ho.

Wo khud
room ke ek kone me baith jaata hai,
drink ka ek lamba sip leta hai.

Camera bed ki taraf jaata hai,
lekin detail me jaane se pehle
scene blur hone lagta hai—
Ladki taangein hawa me uthi Hui
American pura nanga ladki ki choot me dhakke laga Raha hai
sirf moaning voices (ahhh ohhh ufff)
sirf ek garam chudai ki vibe
sirf ek uncomfortable silence
jo shor ke beech bhi mehsoos hoti hai.

Ladki ki chudne ki awaaz
Rathod ke kaano tak pahunchti hai.

Wo apna glass khali karta hai,
aur dheere se khada hota hai. Or bed ki taraf badhta hai ladkhadata hua...

Camera uske chehre par aakar rukta hai—
cold, powerful, emotionless.

Fade out.

Agla Scene – Car Ride, Late Night Silence

Avantika peeche wali seat par gehri neend me chali gayi thi.
Guard ki uniform ab bhi uske jism par thi,
lekin chehra pehli baar thoda sa shaant lag raha tha.

Car smooth road par chal rahi thi.
Street lights ek-ek karke windshield par phisal rahi thi.

Kabeer drive kar raha tha,
aankhein road par jamii hui,
jaw tight,
jaise ab bhi dimaag kisi emergency mode se bahar nahi aaya ho.

Uske bagal me Anisha chupchap baithi thi.

Car ke andar ek ajeeb si khamoshi thi—
wo khamoshi jo awkward nahi hoti,
bas… bhari hoti hai.

Anisha dheere se peeche mud kar check karti hai.
Avantika so rahi thi.

Wo phir aage mudti hai…
aur Kabeer ko dekhti hai.

Kabeer ka dhyaan poori tarah road par tha.

Anisha chuppi todti hai.

“Kabeer…”

Kabeer bina dekhe bolta hai,
“Hmm?”

Anisha thoda hesitate karti hai,
phir bolti hai—

“Kya tumne isse pehle bhi…
I mean…
mere se pehle bhi kisi ko kiss kiya hai?”

Kabeer ke hothon par ek halki si muskurahat aa jaati hai.

“Haan…”
wo casual tone me bolta hai,
“2–3 ex to reh chuki hain meri.”

Anisha kuch nahi bolti.
Bas khidki ke bahar dekhne lag jaati hai.

Road ke lights uski aankhon me reflect ho rahe the,
lekin dimaag kahin aur bhatak chuka tha.

Kabeer uski body language samajh jaata hai.

Wo thoda soft ho jaata hai.

“Lekin…”
wo bolta hai,
“mujhe maloom hai tumne kabhi kisi ke saath nahi kiya.
I mean…
wo tumhara pehla chance tha.”

Anisha fir bhi khamosh rehti hai.

Kabeer ek pal rukta hai,
phir bolta hai—

“Aur shayad… mera aakhri.”

Is baar Anisha ka dhyaan toot jaata hai.
Uski aankhon ki corner se
wo Kabeer ko dekhti hai.

Kabeer bolta rehta hai—

“Anisha, tum maano ya na maano…
jab us guard ne tum par gun point ki thi na…
main andar se bilkul dar gaya tha.”

Uski awaaz me confidence kam,
sach zyada tha.

“Mujhe ghuma-phira ke baat karna nahi aata,”
wo seedha bolta hai,
“bas itna kehna chahta hoon—
jo tumhare saath feel hota hai…
wo un 2–3 exes ke saath kabhi nahi hua.”

Anisha chup thi,
lekin ab wo sun rahi thi.

“Tumhare us kiss me jo feel tha na…
wo kabhi kisi ke saath nahi aaya.”

Kabeer thoda sa gehri saans leta hai.

“Main bas yeh keh raha hoon…
Anisha, mujhe tum pasand ho.”

Car thodi smooth ho jaati hai,
jaise road bhi sun raha ho.

“I think I’m crazy about you,
us din se jab tum mujhse takrai thi.”

Wo halka sa smile karta hai.

“I really… really like you.
Aur shayad…
yeh sirf ‘like’ tak nahi hai.”

Is baar Anisha ke mathe ki silwat dheere-dheere mit jaati hai.
Uske chehre par
ek soft smile,
ek chhupa hua blush aa jaata hai.

Wo apna chehra Kabeer ki taraf karti hai.

Kabeer ki baatein poori hui bhi nahi hoti
ki Anisha apna haath dheere se uske haathon par rakh deti hai—
ek chhota sa,
lekin bahut clear signal.

Shayad main bhi kahin na kahin…
yehi feel karti hoon.

Anisha ka haath apne haath me mehsoos hote hi
Kabeer ke chehre par
ek gehri si muskurahat aa jaati hai—
na jeet ki,
na ghamand ki,
bas pyaar ki.

Anisha apna sir seat par piche tikaa leti hai,
aankhein band kar leti hai.

Uske chehre par sukoon tha—
jaise dil ne
dusre dil ko approval de diya ho.

Kabeer steering ko thoda aur tight pakadta hai…
aur car ki speed badha deta hai.

Shehar peeche chhoot raha tha.
Aur kahin na kahin,
do dil
aage badh rahe the.

Agla Scene – Rahat ka Monologue (Late Night, Silence ke Beech)

Raat kaafi aage badh chuki thi.

Gali ke streetlight ki peeli roshni khidki ke parde se chhanti hui kamre me aa rahi thi.
Rahat dheere se darwaza band karti hai,
jaise awaaz bhi kisi raaz ka hissa ho.

Wo apne kapde badalti hai—
simple nightwear pehenti hai.

Mirror ke saamne ek pal ke liye rukti hai.

Uski aankhon ke niche thakaan saaf dikh rahi thi,
lekin us se zyada
aankhon me woh sab tha jo aaj dekha, mehsoos kiya, jhela.

Wo bed ke paas aakar baith jaati hai.

Aur jaise hi akeli hoti hai—
dimaag chal padta hai.


---

Rahat (voice-over, dheemi aur gehri):

“Agar aaj zara si bhi galti ho jaati na…
agar wo lift upar nahi aati…
agar kisi guard ko thoda bhi shak ho jaata…”

Flashback me—
fire alarm,
gun points,
nashili aankhein,
aur Avantika ka kamzor sa chehra.

“…to shayad aaj hum me se koi yahan nahi hota.”

Control room jalta hua,
computers se uthta dhuaan,
aur uska bhaagna.

“Humne jo kiya…
wo sirf ek ladki ko bachana nahi tha.
Wo ek system ke muh par thappad tha.”

Rahat apna haath uthati hai—
wahan halki si jalne ki laal nishaani thi.

Wo paas rakhi coconut oil ki bottle uthati hai,
hath par thoda sa tel nikalti hai
aur dheere-dheere jaley hue hisse par lagane lagti hai.

Uski ungliyon ki movement slow hai,
jaise jism se zyada
dimaag ko sukoon dene ki koshish ho.

“Mujhe dar nahi laga…
yeh jhoot hoga.”

Uske zehen me guards ke chehre,
band kamre,
aur woh pal jab sab kuch haath se nikal sakta tha.

“Par us darr se zyada…
gussa tha.
Is baat ka gussa
ki Avantika akeli nahi hai.”

Wo oil ki bottle side me rakh deti hai.

Rahat dheere se bed par let jaati hai,
takkiya sir ke niche set karti hai.

Ceiling ko dekhti rehti hai.

“Aaj ek ko bachaya…
kal shayad kisi aur ko.
Aur jab tak saans hai…
yeh rukne wala nahi.”

Uski saans dheere-dheere heavy hone lagti hai.
Aankhon me bojh tha—
sirf thakaan ka nahi,
zimmedari ka.

Wo aankhein band karti hai,
sone ki koshish karti hai.

Kamra bilkul shaant ho jaata hai.

Sirf uski saanson ki awaaz
aur ek dil—
jo thak kar bhi
haar nahi maan raha tha.

Montage | Safe Haven

Raat ka waqt.
City ke shor se door,
car dheere-dheere ek basti me enter karti hai.

Streetlights kam hain,
galiyan shaant,
jaise yahan zindagi tez nahi—sambhal kar chalti ho.

Car rukti hai.

Kabeer steering par haath rakhe hue
ek pal Avantika ki taraf dekhta hai—
wo pichli seat par gehri neend me hai.

Kabeer dheere se Anisha ki taraf jhukta hai.
“Anisha…”

Anisha aankhein kholti hai,
pehle confused, phir sab samajh jaati hai.


---

Cut to: Building Entrance

Kabeer aur Anisha
milkar Avantika ko support dete hue
building ke andar le jaate hain.

Avantika ke kadam ladkhadate hain,
lekin dono use girne nahi dete.

Watchman ki chhoti si cabin.
Neend me doobi aankhein.
Kabeer keys leta hai, sirf ek formal nod.

Lift nahi—
seedhiyan.

Har step ke saath
Anisha Avantika ka haath aur tight pakad leti hai.


---

Flat Door Opens

Lock ghoomta hai.
Darwaza khulta hai.

3 BHK flat.

Na luxury.
Na naya-naya furniture.

Bas
saaf deewarein,
simple parde,
aur ek aisi feeling
jaise yahan kabhi
ek normal middle-class family hansi hogi.

Ghar zinda lagta hai—
khali hone ke bawajood.


---

Bedroom

Kabeer aur Anisha
Avantika ko ek bedroom me le jaate hain.

Kabeer dheere se
use bed par bitha deta hai.

Avantika thaki hui,
lekin ab uski aankhon me dar nahi—
sirf exhaustion.

Kabeer ek nazar Anisha ko dekhta hai.
Ek chhota sa ishara.

Anisha samajh jaati hai.

Kabeer room se bahar nikal jaata hai,
aur darwaza band ho jaata hai.


---

Hall

Kabeer hall me aakar
sofe par baith jaata hai.

Apna sir peeche tika kar
aankhein band kar leta hai.

Jaise saari himmat
ab dheere-dheere body chhod rahi ho.

Room ke andar se
halke movement ki awaaz—
kapdon ki,
saans ki.

Phir—
silence.


---

Beat

Bedroom ka darwaza band hone ki awaaz.

Kuch seconds baad
kadmon ki halki aahat.

Ek haath aakar
Kabeer ke shoulder par rukta hai.

Kabeer aankhein kholta hai.

Anisha.

Wo chupchaap
uske paas baith jaati hai.

Dheere se
apna sir uske shoulder par tika leti hai.

Kabeer bina kuch kahe
thoda sa seedha ho jaata hai
taaki use araam mile.


---

Final Frame

Pure hall me khamoshi.

Na baatein.
Na sawal.

Bas
do log,
ek bacha hua sach,
aur ek ladki jo ab safe hai.

Dono
aankhein band kar lete hain.

Raat
pehli baar
thodi si mehfooz lagti hai.