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Thriller BEHEN_CODE
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Update 45



Scene — Party Day (Rathod Farmhouse)
(Cinematic, detailed exactly as your style)


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EXT. RATHOD FARMHOUSE – AERIAL SHOT – EVENING

Drone-style shot.
Ek massive farmhouse dikhai deta hai —

Hara-bhara bada lawn, jisme lambe-lambe ped shadow create kar rahe hain.

Beech me ek shandar white bungalow, colonial architecture wala.

Side me blue-tiled swimming pool, jiske aas-paas fancy lanterns jagmagane lage hain.

Doori par polo ka ground, jahaan kuch foreign guests practice dekh rahe hain.

Ek corner par luxe horse stable jisme imported ghode — Arabian, Mustang, Friesian — sab khade hain.

Gate par 10–15 constables + officers tight security me khade.

Bahar media flashes — journalists entrepreneurs ko capture kar rahe.


Aaj yaha International Business Conference ki after-party ho rahi hai.
Folk cultural dance ke liye stage ready hai… dinner ka grand setup ho chuka hai.


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INT. GRAND PARTY HALL – NIGHT

Camera dheere se hall ke andar ghushta hai.

Foreign businessmen groups me khade hue—
American, European, Australian, Russian, Asian sab milkar business talks kar rahe.
Government officers side me apni duty kar rahe hain.

Background me soft jazz music.
Kuch log English western dance kar rahe— ballroom steps, smooth spins.

Lighting warm-golden. Ambience proper royal.


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BAR COUNTER – ISHAANI

Camera smoothly bar par zoom karta hai.

Ishani bartender ki tarah kaam kar rahi hai.
Black & white stylish bartending outfit.
Bal sleek ponytail me.
Ear me small earpod, group line open.

She whispers,
Ishani (whispering):
“Rahat… Rahat… kahan hai tu? Response de yaar…”

Wo drink mix kar rahi hoti hai but uske chehre par tension.


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SLOW-MOTION ENTRY – RAHAT

Tabhi bheed ke kone se slow motion me entry hoti hai Rahat ki.

Stunning waitress outfit —

Short black skirt

Fitted top

Hands me white gloves

Neck par tiny silver chain

Hair open

Shocking level ki pretty


Har koi use dekh kar momentarily ruk jata hai.
Ek foreign businessman toh apna glass girate-girate bachata hai.

Camera uske chalne ki grace pe zoom.


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BACK TO ISHAANI

Ishani ki nazar jaise hi Rahat par padti hai…
Uska muh literally khula ka khula reh jata hai.

Wo glass me drink dal rahi hoti hai… aur pura focus Rahat par shift ho jata hai…
Drink overflow hone lagta hai… lekin Ishani ko hosh hi nahi.


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RAHAT ISHAANI TAK PAHUNCHTI HAI

Rahat aakar English accent me drama karti hai—

Rahat (smirking):
“Kya hua Ishani? Kabhi itni sundar waitress dekhi nahi kya?”

Ishani hosh me aati hai, jaldi se glass rakh deti hai.

Ishani (whispering frustration):
“Kahan thi tu? Aur yeh kya huliya hai? Yaha catwalk nahi karna, kaam shuru karna hai!”

Rahat hair flip karti hai.

Rahat:
“Oh yes yes… relax.”
“Ek kaam kar, tu yahi neeche observe kar. Main upar dekh kar aati hoon.”

Ishani sir hila kar “haan” bol deti hai.


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STAIRS – RAHAT MOVES UP

Rahat bheed me se careful nikalti hai…
Ek hand me multiple drinks wali plate.
Sidhiya chadhte waqt har step pe uska confidence visible.
Security guards bhi ek baar usse dekh kar phir apni nazar hata lete hain.


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BAR – ISHAANI RETURNS TO WORK

Ishani doobara glass mix karti hai…
Face still serious.
Uske earpod me low whisper sunai deti baki members ki.

Camera upar se bar ka aerial top shot dikhata hai — Ishani ka stress clearly visible.

Scene — Anisha ki Entry (Party Hall)
(Cinematic, stylish, tension + mission vibe exactly as requested)


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GRAND PARTY HALL – MAIN ENTRANCE

Door ke bade-bade glass panels khulte hain…
Aur Anisha entry leti hai.

Black–silver shimmer gown, body-fit, elegant trail.
Hair soft curls me.
Earrings sparkle kar rahe.
Poora hall ek second ko pause jaise ho jata hai.

Uske saath Kabeer —
Black tuxedo, bow tie, confident smile.
Dono hathon me haath daale slow walk karte hue hall ke beech ki taraf.

Camera unke haath ka close-up dikhata hai—
Kabeer chance pakad kar Anisha ka haath aur tight pakad leta hai.

Anisha (fussfussate hue):
“Bas karo… hum acting kar rahe hain. Over mat karo.”

Kabeer fake smile dete huye guests ko greet karta ja raha hai—
Par haath nahi chhodta.


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ANISHA ON EARPOD

Camera thoda zoom-out…
Jazz music background me fade ho jati…
Ear me Anisha ka tiny mic dikhai deta.

Anisha (whispering):
“Ishani di… aage kya plan?”

Immediately earpod me Rahat ki awaaz:

Rahat (upstairs se):
“Niche Ishani ki help kar. Main upar handle kar rahi hoon.”

Anisha ne halka sa head nod kiya…
Aur Kabeer ko aankhon se ishaara: “plan start”.

Kabeer samajh jata hai.
Wo ek bade businessman group ke saath baat me busy ho jata hai—
Jisse Anisha slip away kar sake.


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ANISHA REACHES ISHAANI – BAR SIDE

Ishani drinks serve kar rahi hoti hai par ek second ke liye glance maar kar Anisha ko dekhti hai.

Ishani subtle hand gesture karti hai—
“Idhar. Time hai.”

Anisha quietly bar ke peeche ki side se cross karte hue Ishani tak pahunchti hai.

Dono ek dusri ko tiny nod deti hain.


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MISSION START – AVANTIKA SEARCH (MONTAGE)

Music tone slightly thriller ho jata hai.

1. PASSAGEWAY

Ishani & Anisha side corridors me chalti hui.
Dim lights.
Camera unke tense faces capture karta hai.

2. ROOMS CHECKING

Ek ke baad ek rooms—

Pehla room: empty.

Dusra room: sirf files aur conference material.

Teesra room: guest resting area—no sign.


Dono ka pace tezi se badhta ja raha hai.

Farmhouse bahut bada—
Maps, corners, hidden doors—pairon ki awaaz tak echo hoti.


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3. TOOLS OUT

Ishani apron me se pins & tiny safety tools nikaalti hai.
Ek locked service room aata hai.

Anisha:
“Try kar…”

Ishani pin ko lock me adjust karke 2-second me unlock kar deti hai.

Dono quietly andar jati hain—
Storage room.
Empty.


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4. GUARDS SE BACHNA

Ek corner par guard patrol karte dikhta hai.
Turant Anisha drunk-act mode on kar deti hai.

Wo hilti hui Ishani ke kandhe par sir rakh kar bolti hai—

Anisha (slurry voice):
“Please… mujhe rest chahiye…”

Guard awkwardly side me hota hai,
“Ma’am please go ahead, room left side.”

Dono guard ke passed-out hone ka wait karke quietly reverse direction me nikal jaati hain.


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5. ANOTHER LOCKED ROOM

Ishani again pin try karti hai.
Anisha peeche khadi watch pe rakhti hai.
Lock click.
Room empty.


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6. STEALTH MOVES

Dono ghuspaithiye ki tarah walls ke saath-saath chalte hain.
CCTV se bachne ke liye blind spot use karte hain.
Dono ke steps me sync.

Lagataar 15–20 minutes ki search ke baad bhi Avantika ka koi surag nahi.

But dono ke faces me determination clear—
Haarne ka sawaal hi nahi.

Camera upar se unki pairing ka montage dikhata hai—
Black gown + bartender outfit
Ek dum cinematic spy vibes.

Scene — Rahat ka Search Operation (Upper Floor)
(Tense, cinematic, thriller + emotional control — exactly as you described)


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UPPER FLOOR – DIM CORRIDOR

Camera hallway me move karta hai—
Yellow warm lights, lambe-lambe corridors,
Left–right rooms har taraf.

Rahat slow steps me chal rahi hai,
Hand me silver tray jise cover ke liye rakha hai—
Taaki waiter lag sake,
Par asli kaam kuch aur hai.

Uske kaan me earpod… faint sa group ka static sunai deta hai.

Rahat (whispering):
“Ishani… Anisha… main upar hoon. Har room check kar rahi hoon.”


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ROOMS SEARCH – STEALTH MODE

Rahat ek door par rukti hai.
Hath ki ungli se handle check karti hai— lock nahi.

Wo quietly door open karti hai…
Inside sirf official meeting setup.
Empty.

Next room—
Suites, but empty.

Agla room— storage.
Rahat ke chehre par tension: “Avantika… kidhar ho tum…”

Camera peeche se shot deta hai—
Rahat walls ke close walk karte huye
CCTV ke blind spot use kar rahi hai.
Just like a trained undercover.


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INCOMING CROWD – FOREIGN GUESTS

Corner se 3–4 foreign guests aate hain.
White Americans, Chinese, aur do young Russian boys.

Sab party mood me—
Drinks, laughter, loose body language.

Rahat turant tray ko adjust karke
Professional waiter look banati hai
Aur side se pass hone lagti hai.

Par Russians ki nazar us par tik jaati hai.

Unke steps slow ho jaate hain.
Eyes upar se neeche tak Rahat ko scan karte hue.

Unme se ek boy chewing gum chaba raha—
Aur apne zip ke paas pant adjust karta hai.
Camera just uske haath par quick zoom.

Rahat abhi bhi unse bekhabar,
Apna kaam karte hue corner turn karti hai…


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RUSSIANS BLOCK HER WAY

Suddenly peeche se ek thick Russian accent:

“Hey beautiful lady…”

Rahat turn karti hai—
4 boys khade.
Sabki aankhon me cheap flirtation.

Boy 1 (gum chabate hue):
“Do you have something for us?”

Boy 2:
“Hey… do you wanna some fun with Russians?
You look tired... Ahh haan... Try some Russian dick you indian whore, it will blew your tiredness...
Come on baby… let’s enjoy

Boy3:
Oh she's damn hot, she's look exactly the motherfucker waitress whome I fucked last week... She's so hot, she's so lusty man, I wanna taste her black indian pussy

Everybody laugh,
Unke words dragged…
Disgustingly playful.

Rahat ke andar ka blood suddenly boil karne lagta hai.
Eyes me anger ka spark.
Haath tray par thoda tight ho jata hai.

But mission sabse upar.
Yaha koi scene create nahi kar sakti.

Wo halki si forced smile ke saath kehti hai—

Rahat:
“Excuse me… guests downstairs are waiting. I have work.”

Aur side se pass hone lagti hai.

Russians thoda peeche hote hain,
Haste hue, cheap comments karte hue
Neeche ki taraf chal padte hain.

Camera unke jaate hue blurred background me—
Aur foreground me Rahat ka face:
Anger + insult + control.

Rahat hoth hilati hai—
silent lipsync:
“Madarchod kahin ke…”


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BACK TO THE MISSION

Rahat deep breath leti hai,
Khud ko control karti hai,
Aur fir se mission mode on.

Hath me tray,
Eyes alert,
Steps quiet…

Wo agla locked room try karti hai
Aur Avantika ki search dobara shuru kar deti hai.

Camera overhead wide shot deta hai—
Neeche hall me thousand lights,
Upar ek akeli Rahat,
Shadow me chalti hui.

Mission continues…

Scene — Discovery of the Underground Floor (Highly Cinematic, Tense, Fast-Paced)


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PARTY HALL — Ishani & Anisha Searching

Camera hand-held style me Ishani aur Anisha kaafi tense nazar aa rahi hain,
Room se room, corner se corner check karte hue.

EarPods me static…
Ishani whisper karti hai—

Ishani:
“Arti… yaha kuch nahi mila yaar.”

Anisha (frustrated tone):
“Shayad humne calculation hi galat kar li…”


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CUT TO: ARTI — BEDROOM HQ MODE

Arti ka room dim light me.
Laptop khula hua.
Screen par 3D map jaisa Rathod farmhouse ka architecture.
Coffee ka mug side me jisme bhap upar uth rahi.
Arti ka focus razor sharp.

Wo calm but tense voice me bolti hai—

Arti:
“Ek minute… upar ka floor check karo.”


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RAHAT — UPPER FLOOR

Rahat tray haath me liye hallway me khadi.

Rahat:
“Main upar hi hoon Arti… pichle do ghante se dhoond rahi hoon.”


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ARTI — CONFUSED

Laptop ke screen par ek info highlighted hoti hai:
3 FLOORS: Ground + 1st + 2nd

Arti eyebrows contract hote hue:

Arti:
“Lekin… building to 3 floor ki batayi gayi hai…”


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ANISHA — FROM DOWNSTAIRS

Crowd ke beech Anisha side ho kar whisper me:

Anisha:
“Kya? Aisa nahi ho sakta. Building bas do floor ki hai. Bahar se bhi clearly dikh raha hai.”


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ISHANI — LOGICAL SNAP

Bar counter ke paas Ishani quick whisper me:

Ishani:
“Exactly, Arti! Ek pure floor aur kahan jaa sakta hai? Floor gayab to nahi ho sakta…”

Camera Arti ke face par CUT —
Her eyes widen.

Zoom on her pupils.
Heartbeat sound effect THUMP… THUMP… THUMP…

Suddenly realization.


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ARTI – SHOCKING REVEAL

Arti (slow, controlled, serious):
“…suno Rahat… Ishani…”

Rahat & Ishani dono instinctively apne कान par hand adjust karte hain
taaki Arti ki next baat clearly aaye.

Arti:
“Woh teesra floor… UNDERGROUND hoga.”


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REACTIONS

Rahat:
Eyes widen… her anger + thrill mix expression.
“Holy— Arti, tune sahi pakda!”

Ishani:
Aankhon mein spark.
“Haan! Secret underground floor… exactly yahi logic banta hai.”

Anisha (excited + serious):
“Bilkul! Itni bhid me kisi ko chhupa kar rakhna impossible hota…
Underground hi safe spot hoga unke liye.”


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RAHAT — ACTION MODE

Rahat tray side par rakh deti hai
aur quick whisper karti hai—

Rahat:
“Sahi kaha Arti. Main niche aa rahi hoon.”

Phir Ishani & Anisha ko:

Rahat:
“Tum dono underground ka raasta dhundo…
Main turant join karti hoon.”

Camera Rahat ke legs ka follow shot—
heels ki fast tapping sound,
dramatic background music rise…

MISSION LEVEL: NEXT STAGE UNLOCKED
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