Adultery अनीता सिंह -- किरदार निभाना (Role Play)

[seansean007]

For example, look at the difference in the two images below (one yours, the other mine), it took me some time to come up with a proper picture of Anita (look at her flat stomach and belly, that is how I imaginer Anita, even though her boobs are slightly bigger). This is the level of detail and imagination I have put into creating the story. I don't doubt your writing skills, but I know this character is my imagination and only I can imagine and create it the way I have imagined it to be. Readers just want to read story and they will be happy with whatever story they get to read, but you as a writer should understand what I am trying to say. There are many plots to write story, pick one, create new character and give the readers something fresh to read. Thanks again.