23-12-2025, 11:35 AM
(23-12-2025, 10:26 AM)RCF Wrote: Excellent writing again and slow buildup is really good.
As for the characters, Shameless people..trying to find reasons for their affair...
"The cage isn't always bars. Sometimes it's love... that forgets to let you breathe."
Who asked them not to confide their true pain and intentions to their partners and confront the cage? Their loved one's will understand and change their ways provided these two give them the chance...but No they want dreams fulfilled by some one else, planning their kisses and nights together and showing to each other we are doing it because we are alone...such bullshit....cheating is a choice not accident.
Some day she will realize the pain when she loses Prem and Aara lol
~RCF
Thanks for the feedback.. As you said yes its a choice, reasons are for convenient to hide their flaws.. im just showcasing stories where characters finds the reaons..


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