Adultery I Orchestrated my Wife's Cheating, but Why? [Completed - 27 Chapters]

[heygiwriter]

I mean the idea is great and has a great potential for a sequel but I think them having kids changes the whole equation . I mean there is no going back kind of thing . They are happy and He is also happy , so it is a perfect end . 

Not a criticism .

Also , The story could have been long , I mean few extra chapters instead of sequel . The Set up was perfect but execution felt a bit off . I mean the reaction of POOJA was like Meh , I  mean I was expecting a little more reaction from her but it is okay , Since She is in love with VIKRAM more than her husband , Yeah I know her husband pushed her but still Her chemistry with VIKRAM was better , She deliberately get closed to him , VIKRAM no matter what he did at the end He truly loves her . I would say Cancer or not She would have eventually seduced by VIKRAM . 
His cancer should not have revealed to VIKRAM , added to VIKRAM manipulation , Her realizing what a grave mistake she made , and then final act of her confronting both of them ..........  But leave it . I am kind of fan of good ending , So i was expecting of them making their to each other . But Vikram turning out to be a good guy , marriage and then kid , changes the whole thing . 

and I like how you treat the eroticism in the story . I mean little sexual stuff made the story more engaging like I was more interesting in the drama ..... hahahaha 

But It is good story , The length was perfect . The way you sums up the plot in 1 page deserves a praise   


But any ways why not post a draft or give a try because the idea has the potential , I would love to read more . 

Please write the Sequel if possible , Turn it into series , Why ? because The characters were great . 


Kudos to you , I love the story . Looking forward to read more of your work . 

Thanks a lot...  for the feedback yes.. i do have a draft or idea like... Vikram and Pooja settled now in UK.. Vikram was still bugged by memories of Arjun and his sacrifices.. he decided to turn this into a book/story.. he works for a company which is into publications as well.. He approaches his immediate boss James who happens to like the story.. he himself involved in turning this into book.. He was more interested in Pooja than the story itself.. The one thing James had seen as bait is.. Vikram's not revealing he had watched Arjun in the rooftop hideout.. that's a crucial thing if he had revaled it things would not have came this far.. James starts his own manipulations gets pooja involved in it.. Pooja has to take revenge for what vikram did back.. root giving back same medicine Vikram knowing gave to Arjun.. .. this is just vague in my mind lets see... 

currently im working on a new story.. already posted here..  

THE HUSBAND's Doubt -- Story Link --> The Husband's Doubt

once the story is wrapped i may revisit.. now currently im into this story