Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife

[Hellybelly]

I think almost all readers feel the analysis though they don't or can't express it in words, the main cause or purpose of analysis should be based on erotic details rather critically appreciation of update, details of private parts, where make genital details are missing, foreskin, smell, or Anita's hip size, her spreading and details of her asshole, all are missing. She sucks the dick with male spitting on it, but the expression and slow process is all missing which make story highly erotic. I would suggest to add these details to increase the criticism rather extending the update with boring repeated dialogues. Which make it extremely slow and repeating. If even in one update you'd give details of above things rather repeating dialogues an d situations which are unnecessary; you'll see the response of readers which would be mind-blowing. ...take my words and apply the changes which I suggested. And see the growth. Aap critical appreciation chahte hn without applying the changes, that's why readers lose interest. Ek baar kriye to jo maine btaya hai, appreciation ki zarurat hi nahin rahegi bcz story already perfect hi hai