Adultery Priya Didi

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The way you were narrating the thoughts inside Priya's head and her comparisons.... 
That was so real.

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Hi Strangerstf

 
Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback, it really means a lot to me! I’m so glad the way I depicted Priya’s inner thoughts and comparisons resonated with you. That’s exactly what I was aiming for.
 
In this particular moment, I wanted to capture the complex and sometimes conflicting emotions that can arise in a person’s mind, especially when they’re caught in a whirlwind of thoughts and feelings. Priya, in that scene, is experiencing such intense emotions due to everything that’s unfolded throughout the day. She's physically with her husband, Amit, yet emotionally her mind is elsewhere, with Ravi, tangled up in the impact of the events she's gone through.
 
I think sometimes, when we’re deep in our own thoughts, we can feel pulled in different directions, especially in emotionally charged moments like romance. So when Amit, still unaware of the turmoil she's going through, gets closer to her, I wanted to explore that contrast, her physical presence with him, but her mind occupied elsewhere, torn between loyalty, desire, and the lingering effects of everything that’s happened.
 
It’s always a challenge to capture such complex emotional moments, but it’s also what I love about storytelling. I really appreciate you picking up on that layer, it’s so encouraging to know that it’s being felt the way I hoped.
 
As always, I’m so grateful for your continued support! You’ve been such a consistent and positive presence in my writing journey, and I can’t wait to share more with you soon. Your feedback keeps me inspired and motivated to push deeper into the characters and the emotions I’m trying to portray.
 
I will be pushing more updates soon.  Please stay tuned, and thanks again for being so awesome.
 
With warm regards
 
-- Shailu