Incest Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale
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(15-12-2025, 09:51 AM)xfirefox Wrote: WOW!

pure heart warming and excellent as well as complimentary update to the story line.

anticipation was so high, that I was on the edge till the last two LINES. what a bulidUP.

this update has just raised the BAR to another level.

It's always the journey towards the ultimate with all the highs and lows that defines the writer's foresight and imagination and that adds the weight to THE STORY.

It's not the vocabulary but the concoction and summation of well thought ideas and there presentation with everything woven in such a dramatic way and that too with how one delivers that is the key.

One of the best update so far and also the story defining.

keep up the good work.

*do add update number at the starting of every update.

well I liked the nostalgia of drinking tea in steel glass.

* also add a rough handmade map\blueprint of the house for the better understanding and deep engagment with the story.

* IF you plan to add photos to the story, then use AI generated image only, not of some tv\movie actors. but I'm ok as it is going on, I don't want your focus on other mundane things. No compromise with the quality of the storytelling.

don't take so long to post an update, on the otherhand this wait was worth it, but it's also killing. he he

Thank you so much for the feedback i dont know much about images i will try to post with images more.
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RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by Akhilaa - 05-12-2025, 12:11 PM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by BiratKj - 08-12-2025, 09:41 AM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by BiratKj - 08-12-2025, 07:49 PM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by nivithenaughty - 15-12-2025, 10:12 AM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by Sage_69 - 31-12-2025, 02:03 PM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by Sage_69 - 06-01-2026, 07:01 AM
RE: Not just a Mother Anymore - Tale - by dk1235 - 16-01-2026, 06:28 AM



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