12-12-2025, 09:00 PM
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(12-12-2025, 04:03 PM)heygiwriter Wrote: I understand what you mean. I also find it unrealistic when a story shows a woman suddenly giving in without any emotional or logical reason. It never feels believable.
It’s a broader topic, actually. For some, it’s fantasy; for others, it comes from a feeling of having no choice. In reality, cockhungery womens are rare and mostly exist in exaggerated fictional portrayals. I believe that when a woman is tempted to cheat or engage in intimacy, it’s usually not because someone looks exceptionally good—it’s because an opportunity or circumstance pushes her, whether through choice, pressure, loneliness, or manipulation.
In my writing, I try to keep situations grounded—showing why a character feels tempted, vulnerable, or pushed into something—rather than turning her into a caricature. I want the characters to remain human, and for their emotional connections to make sense.
There are very few cases where a straightforward relationship between partners naturally turns into a compelling story. That’s why many erotic stories end up centered on themes like cheating or cuckoldry. Even with this particular story, on the surface it appears to be a tragic love story, but if you remove key elements like Arjun’s suffering or illness, it would simply be a wife cheating on her husband and a husband watching it happen. Without those two elements—cheating and cuckoldry—there wouldn’t be much depth left in the plot. But with a solid emotional foundation, it becomes much more believable.
I appreciate your feedback, and I’ll keep aiming for more realism, sensitivity, and emotional depth in the stories I write.
I luv this heygi....your take on women and their sexuality vibes....now I sincerely wish you take up this subject for your next project....with your easy narration and excellent grip over language, sure you'll create a master piece and develop a large base of followers...not in recent past did I see so many responses / comments to a story in just less than a day....all the best ....however remember we all visit this forum for some good stuff...


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